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Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2013 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 35

Loved it! Very existential!

Oy..Leighton..Kodos!! Ouch!



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for the review!

heh, you got it! Very nice :D it's going to be quite a ride <3

Reviewer: TJorvik Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2013 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'd like to offer something more constructive than 'I LOVE THIS STORY', but not sure I can. Surprised to see Nero dispatched so quickly (or was he) and always, somewhere, the shadow of Kirrok is lurking. Spock's inconsistency in this chapter...mmm....

Author's Response:

hey, thanks for the review :)

hnnngh I love it to hear something like that! Thank you so much <3

Spock was inconsistent? I'll have to look into it again! Thanks for the heads up!!

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2013 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 35

Bin echt gespannt wie sie den Konflikt von Spock lösen wollen - auf der einen Seite ein programierter Cyborg, auf der anderen Seite ein ich immer Bewußter werdender Vulcanier, der er nunmal auch ist. Beides steht in totalem Widerspruch zueinander...
Bin echt gespannt, wie das gelöst werden soll, denn so wie es ist, kann Spock nicht wirklich sich auf sich verlassen, genau so wenig wie Jim sich auf ihn verlassen kann...

hmm.
Du liebst es echt kompliziert.

Author's Response:

Heya, danke für das review!

jap, allerdings... Echt schwierig, so wie es zur zeit ist >.o aber wenigstens scheinen die zwei zueinander zu halten. Ursprünglich wollte ich es anders enden lassen xD aber so fand ichs schöner^^

Reviewer: PaintedBird Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/2013 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 34

I just re-read this chapter.  There is a lot going on here!  I'm interested in seeing what happens with Booker as well as the boys, and I look forward to the next chapter.

I have a project based on this story and am looking forward to having it finished so I can show it to you.



Author's Response:

heya, thanks for the review!

yeah, some chapters just seem to stay on one problem and some are just all over the place :) I'm glad that you're interested in Booker ^^ I was so worried I put him too much in the spot light (He'll take a little backseat now, so it doesn't get too much)

Hopefully the next chapter will be on friday. The past two weeks have just been absolutely crazy for me >.o

 

ooooh god I'm so excited for that project! I still need to read Monster, though... ugh! time! I need tiiiime! *rips a hole in time and space*

Reviewer: cowgirl dressage Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2013 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 34

about time!  great job.



Author's Response:

hey, thanks for the review!

glad you approve ^.^ it really was high time they got their act together

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2013 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

Re the review: if you really want a new one, you might use the 2nd paragraph and put underneath the sentence, "Staring at...fantastic."

Just a most humble idea.

You  might also mention His Black Shiny Crackly Menace-ship.   uuuuurgl 8-0



Author's Response:

Heya, thanks for the reviews^^

he's so enarmoured with the humans, he won't take just any humanoid x) hrhrhr

you're right, the bots really seem to be his gut instinct :D but the. What does it say that they are afraid of their own host/don't like him? Hmmm...

that's a good idea - mentioning the professor. I'll think about it!!

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2013 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 34

Oh, finally!

Lol I was thinking the bots already knew--they liked Jim right away (another parallel to human "gut" instinct ;).

And I was worrying that "save the human" might become a problem in presence of humanoids. Apparently not...

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2013 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 34

“My system adores you. As do I.”

Klasse Satz.
Na endlich hast du die Beiden soweit..
und uns auch.

:-)

Schöne Woche wünsch ich dir.

Author's Response:

Heya, danke für das review :)

freut mich, dass dir der satz gefallen hat ^.^ jaaa ich war so happy, dass sie endlich so weit waren :D

ich wünsch dir auch ne schöne woche :)

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2013 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 33

O.O Im not gonna sleep



Author's Response:

hey, thanks for the review ^.^

oh god XD but it'll be a while before the next chapter :O you gotta sleep!

Reviewer: Mairin Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2013 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 33

CLIFFHANGER................I wonder what Marcus has to do with Nero.

They have a plan I know (hope) they do.



Author's Response:

heya, thanks for the review!

hmmm... they don't have to do that much with one another, honestly :) primarily only the fact that Nero has stolen the data chip links them together ^.^

Reviewer: spock2U Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2013 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 33

not so much interested in 'plot'; to be honest i like it merely as a vehicle for the psychology. i'll still keep wanting to read on though i'm hoping for a journey through the respective psyches more than a journey through events and happenings.

i'm hoping you don't get lost or sidetracked by 'exterior action' i guess :)



Author's Response:

heya, thanks for the review :)

aahh I see! well don't you worry. since I'm terrible at writing action, I'm diving much more into the psyche ;) but I need a little action and plot in order to tickle more out of the characters and spur them to reveal more of themselves. you'll get your fix next chapter, I reckon - when everything starts coming down and the boys have the time to reflect on what has happened

 

I try not to get sidetracked :) I'll keep it in mind!

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2013 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 33

Echt spannend, was du da alles zusammenmixt. Bin echt gespannt wie es weitergeht, und was Booker sich da ausgedacht hat... und wo er geblieben ist...

hmmm


LLAP Sera

Author's Response:

heya, danke fürs review :D

die geschichte wird einfach so ein riesiges teil XD oh man oh man... ja... was HAT booker sich eigentlich ausgedacht *schaut ihn kritisch an*

 

wünsch dir ein tolles wochenende :D

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2013 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 32

Great imaginative slant!

 



Author's Response:

heya, thanks for the review :)

so now you caught up with where everyone else is in the story ^.^ glad you still enjoy it :D next chapter should hopefully be up tomorrow...

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2013 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 30

Huh. Very clever. The plot-at-the-end.

The rest wasn't bad either.

XD XD XD



Author's Response:

Ahahhaa! I'm a sneaky little bastard, ain't I? *rolls around and throws surprise plot at everyone*

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2013 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 29

Mmmph. Need another breather. I do sincerely hope the bad stuff doesn't come from personal experience.

At least Jim has entered the ecene, though.

So that's what happened to Betty Boop! Poor critter. But I can understand the motivation...

 



Author's Response:

It'll get less dark now (though I don't promise it'll neer get dark again - because that would be a lie with what I've planned) but I can say nothing is out of personal experience. I've merely a large imagination :) betty boop is an adorable name! But yes, that's what happened to her :/ poor thing

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2013 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 28

Oy. Well I'm back, but had to take a break

This chapter was seriously disturbing. Which I suppose is as it should be.



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for the reviews!

yes, that was kind of the idea of the chapter. I'm sorry if I upset you >.o 

Reviewer: spock2U Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2013 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 32

carry on :)



Author's Response:

*humm* carry on my wayward son...

 

thanky for the review^^

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2013 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 32

guter Ausflug in Bookers Backgroundgeschichte. Interessanter Charakter.
Und Jim sitzt auf der Enterprise und scharrt (mental) mit den Füssen...
Muss hart sein so weit weg vom Geschehen, bei dem er eigentlich dabei sien will, und so gar nicht zu wissen, wie es Spock geht...
Spock scheint das wenig auszumachen...

Bis zum nächsten Mal.

Author's Response:

heya, danke fürs review :)

freut mich, dass es dir gefallen hat^^ immer schwierig mit OC's... wie sehr man sie reinbringt und so sachen >.o

haha ja, der arme Jim! ist total angepisst von allem und jedem und will eigentlich nur Spock einsammeln und Booker anknurren XD

hmm Spock macht es sicherlich was aus, aber er hat im moment 'andere sorgen'. hat auf dem planeten ja kaum zeit gehabt sich hinzusetzen und heimweh zu entwickeln :)

 

bis nächstes mal :D

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 27

Oh, dear--I was afraid Spock was going to rust.



Author's Response:

oh god... the mental image XD that would have been absolutely HILARIOUS. maybe I'm going to write a 'behind the scenes' someday XD ahahaha

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2013 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 26

Aha--"do not try this at home", is it?

Ok, maybe Mudd was a bit abrupt but we of the 10,000 viewibgs can fill in the blanks. ;) And oc the Giant Bug is still hovering over... 8-O



Author's Response:

yeah, well^^ not how they did it, at least... in RL there really needs to be waaaay more negotiation beforehand XD

yep, it was a bit abrupt. I've been debating with myself as to how deep I want to go into all of it, but in the end I thought it best to summarize the parts I don't really need.... it would have been only repetitive with the original series, me thinks

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