Date: 07/23/2012 4:47 PM Title: None
It was a pretty wild story. I held my breath several times.
I do not particularly like stories with character controls / controlled, but on Vulcan, or rather, 7453.7 years ago, I can accept it as inevitable.
As for Spock, and Kirk?
(biting my lower lip)
Is not the ending I wished for ..
But I can live with it.
Date: 10/14/2009 12:44 AM Title: None
I really liked the first part of the story, but I have to say I hate the fact that Jim gave in. But it was still very well written and intruiging.
Date: 09/04/2009 4:34 AM Title: None
I thought this was excellent. The plot of the story was awesome! It was like watching a very well written episode. The way you envisioned Vulcan seven thousand years ago was perfect! I only wish they took your script here and made an episode out of it...i would love to see it on a screen. (And yeah i'm talking about the sex parts too hee hee)
Date: 01/01/2006 5:48 AM Title: None
Excellent! A chance to see Spock's true dueling nature and Kirk caught in the crossroads of his desire for Spock. My favorite AU... ever!
Date: 12/23/2005 9:57 AM Title: None
One of my all time AU favorites and the starting point of my own darker writings (which may be a good or bad thing in the eyes of K/S readers ;). Very hot IMO, but heed the warnings - they are all well-earned :))