Date: 12/10/2013 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful elaboration of what the situation of Jim's death and perhaps non-death would trigger in who cares for him. I like it the more because it's quite under tone.
Thank you! I wasn't all that fond of the movie, but it was definitely interesting to explore some of the ramifications of it.
Date: 05/30/2013 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awwww, this was so nice. I love seeing stories where Winona isn't written as a horrible mother. I also love how vulnerable Spock was. I really enjoyed reading it!
"I love seeing stories where Winona isn't written as a horrible mother."
Me too. I wish there were more of them; I think she and Spock could get along quite well. Thank you for the review!
Date: 05/29/2013 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Writing K/S without Kirk even appearing in the story is a feat I didn`t think was possible. This was great. I hope to read more of your stories, I love them all.
Thank you, that's so nice! I'm glad you like my writing. :)
Date: 05/28/2013 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
"He always liked you," she says. "His letters… even when he was complaining about you, I could tell." That's them in a nutshell.
Winona is great in this. I haven't a story including her in a while.
Thanks. I haven't written Winona before, apart from a tiny bit in another fic, and it was interesting to try and get into her POV. I found myself really liking her, actually, I think she and Spock could get on quite well. :)
Date: 05/28/2013 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just saw the movie the weekend it came out, and I cried just as hard as I did in the "Wrath of Khan" and maybe just a bit more so because they left Spock cry in this one. I do so love this story, and even though this is only one chapter and finished I can just see the possibility for a sequel or maybe add more chapters to this but just a thought.
I'm toying with the idea of continuing this, actually, but I have a bunch of other stuff to write first so we'll see how it goes. Glad you liked it!
Date: 05/27/2013 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this was good. I like the ambiguity and the hope and the love that swirls around everything you've written. Makes me hungry for a third movie. Of all the people to know, Winona would know, and Spock would understand. Great job.
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!