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Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2017 1:41 PM Title: Ki'vravshal Ozhika T'nash-veh

Love the last line

Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2015 9:04 AM Title: Ki'vravshal Ozhika T'nash-veh

You want more but the point if short story format is that more would spoil it. This is a very good idea for a short story and well put together

Reviewer: cowgirl dressage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2013 10:58 PM Title: Ki'vravshal Ozhika T'nash-veh

ouch.  Spock Prime always kills me, this is grief on top of grief.

Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2013 10:20 PM Title: Ki'vravshal Ozhika T'nash-veh

OH SPOCK! ;_;

He had to hear his love was dead twice and the tears

t'cry'la

Reviewer: mary100859 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2013 8:53 PM Title: Ki'vravshal Ozhika T'nash-veh

So sad to read with Spock Prime having to live through the death of Jim in this universe that his Jim went through when he died the same way. I can just feel the sadness while at the same time I just know the joy he will feel once he leans that Jim lives but I wonder just what he will think when he finds out just how they saved Jim. I do hope you will continue and will do so real soon.

Reviewer: SpirkTrekker42 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2013 6:13 PM Title: Ki'vravshal Ozhika T'nash-veh

Awww that is so heartbreaking!  Are you gonna write more?  You should!

Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2013 4:16 PM Title: Ki'vravshal Ozhika T'nash-veh

OMG SO GOOD! I love stories that show the loss Spock Prime feels when Kirk dies... To lose him twice. And yeah, I hadn't thought he would be angry, that's food for thought. True though, and brings his chracter closer to nu!Spock.

Reviewer: Alexia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2013 2:50 PM Title: Ki'vravshal Ozhika T'nash-veh

Oh, my poor old Spock. Heartbreaking, and beautifully written.

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