Date: 07/23/2015 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
LOVE this line: <i>"It only sounds crazy until you remember this is Jim we're talking about."</i> Also this one: <i>"I'll let you ponder the illogical mess that we know as Jim Kirk while I get something to drink.</i>
Date: 05/27/2013 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was great. The majority of Starfleet not being completely enamoured with Kirk for once was a much needed fresh point of view. Also, (and I've noticed this for your other fics as well) you are a master of "show, don't tell" which is awesome. The dialogue and the action move the story along nicely, and I enjoyed Kirk and Spock being awkward at each other. Scotty's failure at public speaking was a nice touch as well.
Scotty struck me as the too-fast techspeak, freezes-in-place kind when it comes to public speaking. Thanks very, very much!