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Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2013 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

Jealous!Spock is adorable!

Poor Carol, yelled at for being too intelligent, witty, and beautiful. Jim's reaction was priceless. FIGHT OR FUCK INSTINCTS! lolol



Author's Response:

Thank you! So glad you liked. To be honest, I was unsure of that part... TOS Kirk wouldn't have done it, but I feel like nu!Kirk might. Glad it came across ok! 

Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2013 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

Not bad! I have ONE pick though. All Caps really make a fic look kind of ugly. If you want to place emphasis on a word, Italics is always best in any writing format All Caps is for Acronyms and that's it! :)

Happy writing. <3



Author's Response:

Hey, I will keep that in mind. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2013 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

;-)
very cute.

Author's Response:

Thank you!:)

Reviewer: pintospirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2013 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh my god. I loved this. So exactly what I think was going on with Spock. He looked so jealous it was so obvious.



Author's Response:

Yeah. When I heard Carol was going to be in the movie, as a K/S shipper, I wasn't too excited... Then when I saw this clip, I was like, maybe it won't be so bad after all. :) Go Spock! Thank you! It was so fun to write.

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