Date: 05/19/2013 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
Jealous!Spock is adorable!
Poor Carol, yelled at for being too intelligent, witty, and beautiful. Jim's reaction was priceless. FIGHT OR FUCK INSTINCTS! lolol
Thank you! So glad you liked. To be honest, I was unsure of that part... TOS Kirk wouldn't have done it, but I feel like nu!Kirk might. Glad it came across ok!
Date: 05/10/2013 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Not bad! I have ONE pick though. All Caps really make a fic look kind of ugly. If you want to place emphasis on a word, Italics is always best in any writing format All Caps is for Acronyms and that's it! :)
Happy writing. <3
Hey, I will keep that in mind. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 05/10/2013 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my god. I loved this. So exactly what I think was going on with Spock. He looked so jealous it was so obvious.
Yeah. When I heard Carol was going to be in the movie, as a K/S shipper, I wasn't too excited... Then when I saw this clip, I was like, maybe it won't be so bad after all. :) Go Spock! Thank you! It was so fun to write.