Date: 04/30/2013 6:15 AM Title: Returning to post
awwwww this chapter was so utterly adorable!! was going to mention about chapter 1 this kid jim is no ender wiggins (that is a good thing), anyway, kid kirk and the crew on the bridge was sweeeeet.
Aw i'm glad you enjoyed it, please check out the rest of my stories xx
Date: 04/28/2013 9:57 PM Title: Back Again
So sweet and Jim was just like I thought he would be, full of energy and a complete handful for our dear Spock. I am also glad that Jim did remember his experiences as a child with Spock because I think it just made him love Spock even more. Look forward to more of your work.
Awww thanks so much. i hope you enjoy the rest of my stories x
Date: 04/28/2013 4:54 PM Title: Logical Reasoning
I think it is a great start to the story and the fact that Jim already is protecting Spock and as the good doctor said he is already in love with Spock. I can not wait to see how the story progresses I think it will be interesting. Hope to see the update to your story soon.
oh thank you thats really kind i hope you enjoy the rest x
Date: 04/28/2013 4:04 PM Title: Logical Reasoning
Hiya :) You could work on your grammar a bit to improve this. Also just out of interest, did you mean to post this as a round robin? That means anyone can add a chapter.
ahh sorry about the grammar and i didnt realise about the round robin thing.
Thank you for reviewing xx