[Report This]Date: 04/11/2013 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Very biting. Applause. Another one where I have a hard time picking out a favoritie line - but I think it must be:
Life is like a blade across a bone
Scratching along, uneasy monotone.
Author's Response:
LOL thank you. You're reading all my stories!
[Report This]Date: 04/10/2013 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love rhymes, and this was perfect. I read each line, and could see it all before me.
Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, you have no idea how please I am when you comment on my poetry.
Date: 04/10/2013 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Liked this one. A big raw but the MU is pretty living on the edge, isn't it? Keep it up, girls. I like what you're doing.
Author's Response: Raw... yep, I was trying for raw.... Mirror is difficult to write poetry for... all the nicest words are all mushy ones, it seems ... thank you!
[Report This]Date: 04/10/2013 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Mirror verse!! Nice! LOL. Whou would have thought thise would be the result of this line: And fucked me senseless like a cheap porn star. ? AHAHHAHAAH. Well done, as usual. *grits teeth at prospect of touching mirror* You know I've avoided it until now, right?
Author's Response:
I thought we were playing to our strengths, vis if you were doing porn, I was doing Mirror. You could try something new? Anyway, I have conceded the war for now because you got 11 reviews on a poem. (Uploads chocolate wine, three dust-bunny/tribble hybrids and trophy to Pam)
For Now.....