Date: 04/10/2013 12:59 PM Title: Dance Again
It's early for these feels.... Gah. This is very nice. I don't know much about poetry but I know what I like. I like this. I want to build it a blanket fort and cuddle with it... I need more coffee.
No but really this was lovely.
Lol, sorry for the feels so early in the morning! In my defense, I posted it last night! lol. Thank you for the kind words. ;) I honestly don't know that much about poetry either. Aside from that it's put into stanzas, can rhyme or not, depending, and that iambic pentamter is overrated. LOL!
Date: 04/10/2013 4:52 AM Title: Dance Again
Just beautiful. I can just see them there in sickbay, and Jim's smile...and that hand clasp. They're dancing girl...well done.
P.S. When you wrote this, was it formatted this way. Just curious. It looks bunched together. Not sure if it was intentional.
Thank you, Dhaliaxat! And now, it was formatted right yesterday. I don't know what happened, but I have fixed it. Thank you for pointing it out! :) <3