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Reviewer: spock2U Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2013 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

you'd need to ask spock; he counted 2,953 lovely things that you were 'even more lovely than' :)



Author's Response:

Oh, is this a reference to an earlier fic???

 

Reviewer: spock2U Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2013 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

how do i love thee? let me count the ways

thou art more lovely than .... (starts counting)

(carrys on counting)

two thousand nine hundred and fifty three,

captain.
xoxo



Author's Response:

'Thou art more lovely than a summer's day.

Rough winds may shake the darling buds of May....'

But I'm still puzling on 2953??

Thank you for the lovely review.

 

Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2013 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

Impressive.  You two are just showing off now. (don't stop).



Author's Response:

LOL... and loving it! (To quote Maxwell Smart).

Actually  I am having a ball doing this.  Tell us if we get to be a pain in the ass though.... LOL.

Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2013 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow. So beautifully written. Poetry is magical. The meaning behind the words is like a puzzle, each one of us who reads it, interprets it differently. It is no easy feat, to convey a message, so that everyone will understand it. Plus, it is difficult to explain how you feel when reading it. 

Excellent my dear.



Author's Response:

Awwww, thank you so much!  Very thought provoking words about poetry, some aspects I had not considered before.

 

Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2013 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nicely done!!! *takes note* Okay, one porntastic poem and another in the key of shakespeare*



Author's Response:

Thank you.

With your shield or on it LOL.

 

Reviewer: eimeo Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2013 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is GORGEOUS!!! That final couplet - owww, my heart, it breaks! In the best possible way.



Author's Response:

Awwww... thanks.   It is actually really hard to write sonnets.

 

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2013 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

THIS!!! was EFFING beautiful. wow. just... wow :O ... I'm not that sure, why you set it to 'chan or underage sexuality' just yet, but maybe I'll squeeze it out of the lines in a few minutes XD ... and I'm happy that my uneducated review at Pam's poem did elicit her educated reply and in the grand scheme of things your poem XD hehe



Author's Response:

I set it to WHAT?  Holy crap, I'll fix that... Gawd knows, didn't mean to, thanks!  And yes, your review did lead to this LOL.

Thanks for the review!

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