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Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2013 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

were you my forbidden fruit

so temptingly jade in the sun

to cause me to bite the tender flesh

and fall

Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2013 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Needed a dose of Dahliaxat poetry - thank you so much for posting.  Very nice image too!

Author's Response:

Glad I could provide that fix. Thanks for the kind words.

Reviewer: cowgirl dressage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2013 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

really, really beautiful.  I love this.

Author's Response:

Thanks for thinking so. I thought it was way too short, but reading it a few times, I'm beginning to like it.

Reviewer: Jeanne Marie Sosa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2013 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

OMG...omg, Denise, the poem is PERFECT!!!  Oh, you truly are a are GIFTED, as I have told you many, many's short, yes, but it describes their relationship so succinctly...and thank you a million times for using this artwork...


I am smiling now from ear to ear!!  XOX

Author's Response:

Thanks Jeanne. I thought it may have been way too short. Very happy you liked it. Thanks for letting me merge your art with my words. 

Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2013 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loooooooooooooooooooooove the poem, and then the side dish of HINEY!!! :) Gald to see your muse return. :)

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it Pam...Would be nice if my muse could stay for awhile. 

Reviewer: PaintedBird Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2013 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love the picture and the poem goes perfectly with it.  Well done.

Author's Response:

Elfqueen did a great job. Thanks for the kind words.

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