Date: 04/02/2013 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Magnificent! Magnificent!! AND you quoted Coleridge. Coleridge! I now have to do a happy dance all around the bedroom! For she on honey-dew hath fed and drunk the milk of Paradise :))
Oh - so happy you enjoyed it! Doesn't that line fit Jim perfectly?! Doesn't it? And I can so see Spock applying that to him. Especially the 'Beware beware' part (giggle). Happy sigh. So, so many thanks for your comments and glad I could help create a little happy dance.
Date: 04/02/2013 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can't understand why there aren't more reviews. This was hot, and hilarious. Poor McCoy at the end. Very well written. I did envision this story being TOS, but I did have a hard time hearing Jim say fuck. Shall read your other stories when time permits.
Hey - people busy from the holiday maybe? Or maybe read me once and went 'ick' lol? Appreciate the comment on the word fuck. It's something I think I overuse and should probably start watching for that. I also think you're right that TOS Kirk would be more likely to use a different word, or perhaps not use swearing at all. Thank you for commenting!