Date: 03/28/2013 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
So sad, for Jim to remark about the way Spock relinquished any possbility for their relationship by tearing off to Gol! Very insightful...and so moving...this one is lke a gift to the readers...thank you for its bestowal.





Date: 03/17/2013 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
I was liking this until the last stanza, when I went, 'Gah! Gol!' and felt my heart drop into my boots.
Well done!





Date: 03/16/2013 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Welcome! Love this line, "I touched my love upon your lips, your frame marked mine". I enjoyed this, thank you for posting.
Date: 03/15/2013 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice indeed - thanks for sharing :)





Date: 03/15/2013 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved how you deliniated it by each year! How unique! I just love your poetry style and your word choice and descriptions are impeccable. Great job. :)





Date: 03/15/2013 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is really touching. I enjoyed this little countdown of the years and how with each year their relationship changed. The last stanza was heart wrenching, but the piece over all is beautiful.





Date: 03/15/2013 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Another brilliant piece. Love how you did this with every passing year. And the end Spock does leave...It's so sad. But, I love it. Every sentence has such a deep feeling to it. I just can't tell you enough, your work is amazing.