Reviews For 5 Years
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Reviewer: Jeanne Marie Sosa Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2013 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

So sad, for Jim to remark about the way Spock relinquished any possbility for their relationship by tearing off to Gol!  Very insightful...and so moving...this one is lke a gift to the readers...thank you for its bestowal.

Reviewer: Fugitive Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2013 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

I was liking this until the last stanza, when I went, 'Gah!  Gol!' and felt my heart drop into my boots.

Well done!

Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2013 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Welcome!  Love this line, "I touched my love upon your lips, your frame marked mine".  I enjoyed this, thank you for posting.

Reviewer: Tydomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2013 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very nice indeed - thanks for sharing :)

Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2013 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

I loved how you deliniated it by each year! How unique! I just love your poetry style and your word choice and descriptions are impeccable. Great job. :)

Reviewer: ivycross Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2013 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is really touching. I enjoyed this little countdown of the years and how with each year their relationship changed. The last stanza was heart wrenching, but the piece over all is beautiful.

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2013 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

Another brilliant piece. Love how you did this with every passing year. And the end Spock does leave...It's so sad. But, I love it. Every sentence has such a deep feeling to it. I just can't tell you enough, your work is amazing.

 

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