Date: 03/28/2013 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Welcome, Breigh! Glad you've come over...and YES this is a very confusing venue, in four years I STILL cannot for the life of me fgure out how to post anything...but I'm so glad you did and I love this work...it reminds me of metaphysical. Have you ever read John Donne? :D
Date: 03/16/2013 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wish I could hear you read this. I feel that it needs to be heard aloud - that the sound of it in the air would help it live. But when I read it to myself, I'm not sure where emphasis should be, where pauses should be. I'm frustrated with that. But this is lovely, very lovely. Thank you for posting it.
Date: 03/15/2013 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really? I think the archive has the easiest UI of them all. You're probably just used to posting at Deviant Art, LJ and AO3 where shit is complicated and overthinking it, LOL! :) Nevertheless, welcome to the archive, Ms. Tutty, it's definitely a joy to have you. I LOVED your poem. Great way to break in. :) I can tell that your work here is going to be just as lovely as your art. <3
Date: 03/15/2013 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
awww I loved this! very well done! you managed to incorporate so much of the two in this poetry. that's very hard to do! I especially like this line: And more, I’ll give, and more, you’ll take - and this line: We’ll dress ourselves in cardinal red.
I don't know, why ... huh^^