Reviews For Misery
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Reviewer: Spockluv Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2013 6:13 PM Title: Misery

oh my....first I feel for Spock, now Kirk....loving this story!!

Reviewer: spock2U Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2013 10:07 AM Title: Misery

i have to say i adore the fact that you're weaving the invasion of Bajor into this :)

Author's Response:

It fit.

I took a bit of liberty with the timeframe, but it was simply a perfect fit.


Reviewer: Tydomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2013 6:42 PM Title: Misery

Oh gawd...  the worst possible time to ship him out to the arse end of nowhere for a massacre.  

I really like the quickness of these stories - there is nothing unnecessary, you just get straight to the point without waffling but have all the salient bits and that is a skill!  Referring back to what you were saying on the facebook group, these stories could be combined as chapters in one story rather than a series, if you chose to go that way about it.  It doesn't really matter, it's the author's choice, but I think it would work that way too.  Something to consider for your next set of stories!  :D

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading, and I appreciate the advice re: FB chatter.

First, I don't know where the story lines are going yet.  These things are writing themselves at this point.

I'm pretty much at the mercy of my Muse.  *kicking Muse, throwing rocks at it*


Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2013 4:14 AM Title: Misery

More sadness. Now, they will be farther apart. I know the bond thing goes beyond distance...but still. Why does Jim have to go....

Interesting, that you used Bajor...and that you mentioned the Cardassians. 

Perfect title by the way....Now make a happier one....grrrrrrr

Author's Response:

I did some research (thank you, Memory Alpha!) and the timeline almost fits, with a little tweaking.  The Federation wasn't able to do anything until the very end of the Bajoran conflict, and I think that is because of the wormhole.

Politics, bah!

But you know damn good and well the Federation KNEW exactly what was going on, and yet stood by and did nothing.


Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2013 12:55 AM Title: Misery


Sad, sadder, most sad.

Author's Response:

I know.


Reviewer: pintospirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2013 12:25 AM Title: Misery

Glad I took my prozac today. This is depressing. Hopefully it will have a happy ending.

Author's Response:

It has been agony to write.


Reviewer: Kiwigirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2013 12:20 AM Title: Misery

Personally i would  have told starfleet to go F--- themselves and resign. Hope the next chapter brings better news they belong together now and always.

Author's Response:

Throughout history, the military has never given a damn about family.

Kirk is desperate for a distraction, he'll take anything.

Thank you for reading!


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