Date: 04/01/2013 10:03 PM Title: Ante
Fantastic! I want to know whether they continued the game... or went on to play in a different sense of the word!!
Date: 03/07/2013 9:27 AM Title: Ante
Well, you end on a high note. The dialogue got more fluid as I read along and Spock was certainly giving as good or better than he got. Must rate most pleasing in that regard.
I also enjoyed when Kirk accuses Spock of playing him.
Date: 03/05/2013 8:48 PM Title: Ante
That was brilliant...I can just see them playing, Jim removing his shirt and pants...and the last line Spock spoke...like he was commenting on the weather....you want to have sex with me, no biggie...
Jim and Spock were spot on, can't wait for the next chapter...