




Date: 03/04/2013 7:29 PM Title: Sometimes the Simple Solution, is the Best Solution of All
Chocolate semen would completely change the world and its power structure.
No doubt.
~AKO
Author's Response:
Yes... it would bring quite a few people to their knees, I'd imagine..... LOL





Date: 03/04/2013 7:17 PM Title: Sometimes the Simple Solution, is the Best Solution of All
ok i'll admit i'm a freak. someone needs to do barrows and bones and throw scotty in there.
Author's Response:
Sounds like a recipe for disaster LOL.... or heaps more fun....
Date: 03/04/2013 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 6
yeoman barrows, nice!
Author's Response:
One of the best femmes on TOS in my opinion. They should have used her more.
Date: 03/04/2013 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
those two ... are a hoot
Author's Response:
LOL thanks. Deadpan indeed.
Date: 03/01/2013 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please write a follow up, that really brightened up a pretty awful day. Thank you.
Author's Response:
LOL My RL has just exploded with work, mainstream writing and school and social stuff so I don't have time to add to this. But, I have thrown it open to a round robin so others can have fun writing this and entertain you too. Cheers.
Date: 03/01/2013 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
ALL of my strange fics come from our fb group lol
Author's Response:
LOL. Indeed, it is the source of many good things. Hey, I have thrown this open for a round robin, in case anyone wants to join in the fun. I had written two final chapters (1) normal, they get Spock under control, and (2) m-preg, but I was only really shutting it down due to lack of time... was wondering if anyone else would like to contribute?
What sort of trouble can Spock and Jim get into with this? Let your imaginations run wild, peoples!
Date: 03/01/2013 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 6
BAHAHAHHAAHHAAH! Omg...this is so awesomely hilarious and hot. Can't wait to find put what Bones got up to on Risa. Lol
Author's Response:
Thank you. Blame Partricia! It was here idea. I have no idea what goes on in that mind of hers... well, I'm starting to get an inkling....
Date: 03/01/2013 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 6
Whole lotta roflin' goin' on!!!
Author's Response:
LOL thank you! Glad you are liking this!





Date: 03/01/2013 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 6
OMG, I can't stop laughing! The imagery is too much! I can't wait to see where this is going! Thank you for making my day! lol
Author's Response:
LOL thank you so much.... I love it when people crack up laughing at my writing, thanks you!





Date: 03/01/2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
wakes up bleary eyed with a mouth that feels like a sehlat slept in it after rolling in chocolate, vaguely remembers a game of chess then .......... crystal clarity .............. GENE SPLICING ...... "Bo?... No..!!" ............ and emits a long low vulcan moan of shame.
Author's Response:
LOL.... chocolate hangover LOL....





Date: 02/28/2013 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh i see. Awesome. lol.





Date: 02/28/2013 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh i see. Awesome. lol.
Author's Response:
Cheers Thanks
Date: 02/28/2013 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
This reminds me of a David Gerrold Seminar, he was describing ideas for writing on the basis of the What if concept. What if, what would the effect be?.
What if semen tasted of chocolate...............
What if Jim's semen tasted of chocolate
If it did how did that happen
What effect would it have
How would an ignorant command school trainee know about gene therapy.......
What were they doing on Risa?
Can't wait to find out!
Author's Response:
LOL I must get to one of those seminars. When is he next coming to Australia?





Date: 02/28/2013 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh my God. Please let there be a threesome with McCoy. Oh man.
Author's Response:
McCoy is having the same trouble with Yeoman Barrows, what did he have done on Risa LOL?
Thanks for the review.
Date: 02/28/2013 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 6
CHOCOLATE SEMEN IS THE BEST THING I'VE EVER HEARD
Spock is so not the innocent Vulcan
IT WAS ON BONES' HAND! XD
Author's Response:
I will tell Patricia to look at the reviews because it was her idea!
LOL thanks.
Poor Spock, can't help himself.
And poor Bones, ewl!
Date: 02/28/2013 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 6
What, was there a field trip to Risa or something???
(or ... something?)
~AKO
Author's Response:
LOL Shore Leave....





Date: 02/28/2013 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh yeah more sex is definitely gonna work. NOT! Lol. This just keeps gettin better.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I am so happy that everyone is enjoying this! (Snooopy happy dance).





Date: 02/28/2013 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
"Spock pushed him back slightly, and asked, ‘Are you sure that repetitive intercourse is the route to emotional control, Jim?’"
The answer is, "HELL, YES!!"
more!! :))
Author's Response:
LOL I looked at that sentence twice in your review, and thought, did I write that? Yep, sure, there it is right there at the end of Chapter 5. It just looks different when plucked out of context like that LOL.
I NEED SLEEP. Supergirl here is out of the woods, and it is 2.38 am here. I will writ eh rest of the cave chapter tomorrow. Thank you so much for reviewing this!





Date: 02/28/2013 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Funny as Hell!
Author's Response:
LOL blame Patricia, it was her idea. I'm just painting by numbers LOL. thanks.
Date: 02/28/2013 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
Chocolate? I thought it was Love Potion #9, but it was That Old Black Magic (well, dark brown..).
Hilarious--and somehow fluffy?
Author's Response:
LOL thanks, but only you could describe a fic containing the words 'his nose buried in Jim's crotch' as 'fluffy' LOLOLOL.