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Reviewer: Ishtar205 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love the punchline^^

Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2013 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 1



A girl's gotta love her xenobiology!

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I am thinking of doing more of these, on a similar theme....

Reviewer: Cyberrat Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2013 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was hot... And hillarious xD haha. The alien equipment always cracks me up :D well done!

Author's Response:

Thank you.  Blame the echidna and the fangirls LOL

Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2013 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

BAHAHAHAHA! That's the same article I got the prehensile story from, lol and someone here noticed it too!

Man, 42 days of Kohlinar and I can sooooo tell that the repression has had a wonderful effect on you! Welcome back, my friend! LOL One thing though..that tenticle didn't go ALL the way up Jim's pee hole did it? No one likes a catheter, LOL

Author's Response:

LOL was it the echnida story?  

Thank you.  I thought I had purged all my bad habits and emotions, but on day 43 I lifted up the rock that my soul had become and lo and behold the little devils all leapt out from hiding and bit me on the ass!  'I suck at Kolinahr' is now my official middle name, and it ain't half a bad Vulcan pickup line, either.

And as for the catheter thing, I don't know.... but we are talking Jim here, and we are talking pain... who knows?

Cheers and thanks so much for the review.  I am reading your tribble fic btw and loving it.


Reviewer: ironland Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2013 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

LOL,very fun and hot.

Did you read the news about the four little heads of echidna? 

Author's Response:

LOL yes, there was a discussion about this and that's one of the Kinks I wrote into the story.

Thanks for the review!


Reviewer: Kelva Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2013 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 1

This.. Needs to get a sequel.


First time I've read about it being hollow! That's just hot.


I guess I can understand guys fascination with vacuum cleaners now  :P

Author's Response:

LOL thank you.

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2013 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was one hell of a ride. What Jim was experiencing with those suckers and that one naughty tentacle, blew my mind as well. That is truly one hell of an orgasm...but wait, Spock promises that it will be even better if they meld while doing it. I'm dead...

Very hot my dear..

Author's Response:

LOL thanks.  You had to read the Facebook page to understand why this was posted.  Everyone was making... suggestions, and I said someone needed to write it. Then got inspired and did this LOL.

Thank you.

Reviewer: spock2U Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2013 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 1


Author's Response:

Oh, hey, that makes a change from squeeeee.  Glad to see you are branching out LOL.

I needed a break from the pressure of being SERIOUS (imposed on me by persons who shall remain unnamed.) LOL

Thank you for the review.


Reviewer: AKO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2013 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh, shit.

I wonder how I'm gonna clean my splattered brain matter off the ceiling.

It's not even my house!


Author's Response:

I did warn for 'Kink' didn't you notice LOL?

I can't quite figure out if this is a positive or negative review..... 

I'm sliding towards positive but not sure LOL.....


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