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Reviewer: KeBo Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2014 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

You really captured the mood of that episode perfectly. I always knew (and some others have, too.) that this episode was as much about the companion and Cochrane as it was about Jim and Spock. You might wanna read The TOS Commentary on That is just hilarious and yet so true.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  And I will go off and find that commentary. It sounds intriguing!


Reviewer: AKO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2013 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 1



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:) thank you!


Reviewer: spock2U Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2013 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 1


i love you.

Author's Response:

Dammit, if you start every review of my stories with 'squeeeeeeeeeeeeee' I shall... I do not know what I shall do.

But thank you (hug).

Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2013 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awwwwww.... So sweet! K/s 4ever!
Good point about cochrane.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I agree K/S 4ever.

And I love that episode, Kirk looks SO wistful when he is describing true love.....

Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2013 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well that was very fascinating

I do love when humans get smacked with their own cultural perceptions

Author's Response:

Australia is a very newly-mixed country, and cultural perceptions are constantly up and biting us on the ass over here!  LOL  Thanks for review!

Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2013 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEE, super squee. lol. That was just what I needed this evening. So glad I finally found some time to sit down and read this weekend. lol.

Author's Response:

Thanks!  Nice to know my story added something positive to someone else's evening.


Reviewer: Vulcan Lover Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2013 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful piece of work - Perfect in every element it strives to touch upon...


Author's Response:

Thank you so much!


Reviewer: Farfalla Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2013 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

I burst out laughing at the "who is he?" part. Logic can only get you so far, Spock--hope is, after all, an emotion! ~_^

Beautiful image there, at the end.

Author's Response:

LOL thanks.

Reviewer: Hypatia Kosh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2013 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

awww, shkwum! this was so cute... love when Spock is all 'you're seriously asking why I would think that's silly?'

Author's Response:

LOL thank you!


Reviewer: Basic Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2013 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

How is this an NC-17 story?

Author's Response:

Um, because that is the default setting and I forgot to change it?  Sorry (facepalms).  It is labelled Fluff/pre-slash....


Reviewer: Nejasna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2013 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Aw, I would love it if you wrote a Spock POV for this, just to see his thought process from the conversation about Cochrane and human issues, explanation about the Vulcans to observing Jim throughout the day and finally this.
 I wonder if he had a mental list of other alien men aboard the ship and spent his time thinking of what would Jim want in a potential mate and how that would fit each individual. And actually found a match! Somebody other than himself and fully expected their name to be the one Jim says when he asks him who's the guy :D 

Author's Response:

OK will do that asap.  Thanks for the suggestion.


Reviewer: jimali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2013 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

What a sweet story! I don`t think you posted it before but I`m glad you did. It made me smile. And I didn`t even miss the sex. ;-)

Thank you.

Author's Response:

Thank you.  Glad you enjoyed it.


Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2013 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh, why stop it there...I loved this...the was so intimate...even Spock smiling felt normal, cos he does sometimes....well he sure did in the pilot...right in your face smile...thanks very much for finding this and posting...Great job.

Author's Response:

Aw, thank you.  He does smile, when he is alone with someone he trusts.


Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2013 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very nice. :-)

Poor Jim, never realised, that Spock was so near...

Author's Response:

Thank you.  Yes, I agree.


Reviewer: ironland Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2013 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

I never readed this . It is wonderful,  Vuclan logic and Vulcan love. 

Author's Response:

Awww, thanks.  And Vulcans accidentally (cough cough) leaving love notes in their Captain's quarters....


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