Date: 01/23/2013 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, nothing like opening the first chapter of your first fanfiction with a bit of rape and torture! This is intense stuff. I shall look forward to finding out where this leads :D
Seriously, I wouldn't have realised that you're not a native english speaker. Your english was not only very good (a few problems with apostrophes, but nothing that we couldn't easily make ourselves!) but it was also really stylish! You can feel very proud :)
hey! thank you very much, I'm pleased, that you liked it. I was a bit hesitant to start with such a heavy subject, but I'm not really good at fluffy/funny stuff x.x ... and I'm a sucker for hurt/comfort x3
I am soooooo happy, that you guys are supportive of my English. I wanted to write something for months but somehow didn't find the courage. I will look into the apostrophes. Hopefully I'll get the hang of them. :)
Date: 01/23/2013 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am impressed. This is a very strong start to your story, and I would not have known that English is not your first language. I will be interested in seeing further updates. Congratulations on your first fic!
Oh wow! thank you! I was so nervous that it was not readable :D glad you liked it. There will soon be more