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Reviewer: Fugitive Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2013 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

Not on the bridge, I hope?


Reviewer: Tydomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2013 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ha ha, love it! :D  I hope though, that Spock consents to having his clothes taken off - otherwise it would be less 'undivided attention' and more like 'frazzling his brain' ;)

Author's Response:

Actually that was supposed to be Kirk taking his own clothes off, but I kind of like your idea. :)

Reviewer: ironland Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2013 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 1


Reviewer: Mairin Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2013 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

cute and sassy. Like!

Reviewer: CMM Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2013 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 1


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