Date: 01/13/2013 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
You were right at the beginning, it is a bit rough and could do with some editing. I think it is well worth doing at some point because the story is very nice, unique and warmed me up considerably on this cold morning. You said you had some stories in the hopper, I am really looking forward to reading them as well. Nice job!
Date: 01/13/2013 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am generally not a fan of mpreg or other gender benders, but you presented this story in a way that worked for me and I enjoyed it. Your characterization of Kirk's reaction to Spock and his tenderness with Spock was quite nice. Well done.