Date: 01/09/2013 9:20 PM Title: Indeniable Denial
LOL, the thought of Spock with a raging hard-on meeting a flushed and sweaty James Kirk... cruel place to end it, please post chapter 2 (after you have contributed to the Round Robin, maybe?)
Sorry about leaving it there, but I totally DID contribute to the round robin. lol. :D
Date: 01/09/2013 9:06 PM Title: Indeniable Denial
I think you want "deaf," not "def," and to be painfully honest, there are some switches in tense that I didn't always follow, and I can't make heads or tails out of the line "as an invite, shit eating grin firmly in place." But maybe I'm just dense today.
Lol. You are a Goddess. I've been using a shitty Dell notebook since my netbook took a shit this past Summer, and the track pad is really, really touchy. It will just jump to a part of whatever it is I'm writing--from facebook posts to paragraphs in actual stories and delete letters, words, overtype shit and it ssooooooooo annoying. I try to go back and fix, but apparently I missed some shit. Thank you SO much for telling me. *goes to fix*
Contributed to the round robin after all, by the way. Couldn't wait til tomorrow. :)