Date: 12/22/2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 2: Emotional Grenades
Jim is nice to the child. He is better with children as he assumed.
And Carol is really a bitch. How evil was that? And at the top, coming to the wedding reception to say Spock that she is pregnant... oh my...
Good that Nyota was there.
Date: 12/22/2014 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 1:Incendiary Devices of the Emotional Kind.
So, your story is ready, and I'm happy about this. I love your storys but I must read them in a small time. They are so full and wonderful in the description and when the breaks are to long I dont remember all from the last chapter. So I waited for 2 Years. ;-) And now it`s my time. ;-)
You will hear from me. ;-)
Date: 12/18/2014 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 27:Happy-ish Ever After part two
I enjoyed reading each and every chapter of this story and I'm thrilled to hear a sequel will be in the works. I thought the funeral scene was nicely done and the discussion involving David and his well-being was realistic and well done.
I see Dr. Suarez from the Dear Spock series made an appearance. She's a pretty cool character and perfect for helping David. :)
Date: 10/26/2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 24: 101 Reasons Why Villains Schemes Fall Apart (Never Believe Your Own hype)
I really adored this chapter. I can feel Spock's reluctant acceptance in not being able to go on the mission. I do worry for his sanity and hopefully Jim will be able to keep him from going over the edge and staying there. Brilliant chapter!
Date: 09/12/2014 12:29 AM Title: Jim Kirk is Crazy Prepared
I love the way Nyota studies her surroundings and keeping a cool head in this tense situation. As sad as the scen was, I really liked seeing Spock's reaction to Christine's death and his sorrow that she wasn't able to live the life she did in another universe. Great work on this chapter.
Date: 08/24/2014 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 22:Conversations with Monsters
I really do hope that Amanda and the others get out of this okay. I'm so hoping Spock isn't going to be forced to choose between his mother and his son to save. Fantastic chapter! I can't wait for the next one. :)
Date: 08/12/2014 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 21: Batman Gambit as executed by the villain of this piece
I hope Amanda and David are going to be all right! And ohh, poor Jim. I can't blame him for being angry at Winona. It's also so sad that Christine died. This was an incredibly well done chapter. :)
Date: 02/12/2014 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 16: Even, I Think I’m Crazy Right Now
This was so great to read. I enjoyed seeing different dimensions of them conversing. Hopefully they are not losing their minds, but still this was interesting to read!
I know Nyota's stupid boyfriend was a reference from one of the earlier parts to this series and I recognize some others, but I can't remember which stories they belong to!
The stupid boyfriend was a call back to earlier in the series. Nobody's completely crazy. I actually hope to do an entire story with various versions of our protagonists from various dimensions interacting with each other. If I'm lucky I probable start on it this summer or when the story is done.
Date: 01/28/2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 15: Traveling Other Roads
I love it when Amanda is in protective mode and aww, I'm so glad to see Amanda and Chris finally getting their act together. I'm looking forward to seeing the fallout of the discovery that Spock was drugged up with fertility and aphrodisiacs. Great chapter!
Date: 01/10/2014 4:35 AM Title: Fucking bastard
I enjoyed this chapter tremendously. I'm a little worried about the situation with David and whether or not Marcus will be able to get custody of him, even if it's only for a brief time. I know that Spock and Jim won't give him up without a fight and they do have Amanda on their side.
Date: 01/01/2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 13:You are Someone Else
This was a wonderful chapter. A little angst mixed with a little fluff. Perfect. And I really gotta say that I love the scene with Jim trying to get David to take a bath and that they both got peanut butter in their hair. Also, the scene with Spock and Jim was just perfect. Love this. :)