Date: 12/03/2012 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love it. Jealous!Spock is one of my favorite tropes and think you did well with this story. You brought up all his doubts and insecurities as reasons for his jealousy and then paired them with Jim's own doubts, showing the reader that they are not prefect but willing to let down all their guards for each other. Awesome job.
Awww, thank you!
Date: 12/03/2012 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
Saw your review and was just thinking about how you write a great fic and here is another. Writing erotica is not easy AW once commented that there is a point when a writer sees that the audience is what matters rather than getting it right. Otherwise known as the slash versus gay porn conundrum. Slash is not Gay Porn or put simply if you find it hot your mainly female audience probably will.
You are kind! The mechanics of it tends to defeat me since, well, I am not a man. Thank you for your review!
Date: 12/03/2012 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just read this right now...I adored it so much. I can see the shame Spock felt when he assumed Jim had been with Roma. And the scenes where they were going at it...damn good girl...you gave just enough, you don't have to be explicit in every detail...that is why us readers have an imagination....
Excellent work, and the ending made me laugh....even Vulcans fall asleep after sex...lol...
Yay! Thank you!