Date: 11/30/2012 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm delighted that you updated so quickly. This story is wonderfully sophisticated. I keep seeing Kirk, Spock, McCoy, and Uhura standing together, and taking on the galaxy. Beautiful, brilliant, competent, deadly dangerous.
Date: 11/29/2012 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
You did a great job here. It's too easy to make Mirror!verse stories all about gore, not ruthless practicality. No one who makes it to the Academy is stupid, foolish, or weak. They don't waste assets.
I love the way McCoy still remains himself, no matter where he is. This Spock is very like TOS Mirror!Spock, with adjustment for nu!Trek.
I hope you continue this story. I'd like to see how the vicious, violent Kirk of TOS mirror!verse, already modified by Nero's changes, is tempered by this McCoy and strengthened by this Spock.