Reviews For Untitled Haiku
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Reviewer: CptDorkery Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2018 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

Concise and sweet. I loved it.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!  :-)

Reviewer: Dunyazad Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2014 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

It takes just a few words to say so much.

Reviewer: Tydomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

lovely :)

Reviewer: Greywolf the Wanderer Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2012 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

yayyy, moar haiku!!

*koff* I might be biased, lol -- but I think this is a great one.  sums it all up very neatly indeed.  and it can be read a couple of different ways and works either way, woo hoo!!

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love when people can express themselves, with so little words. I have to admit, I had to look up what Haiku meant. Now, I know. You have certainly struck a mood, with so little words you have written. 

An instant in time, helps us to truly visualize what is happening between them. You listed it slash, and romance. So, I gather from that, they are touching romantically in that instant, than parting, perhaps a busy day on the Enterprise. Like when we say goodbye to our husband or wives when they head off to work..but that simple gesture of fingers brushing, at that moment, links them as one, even though they have parted, and go on with their day.

I do hope I made any sense, of what you were trying to convey. Thanks so much for sharing.

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