Date: 10/23/2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG..this just made me smile, and have a little laugh. You got the characters down perfectly. That is so Spock....the way he explains things in his own complicated way, using such big words, that I can barely make out what he's saying.
Jim, is splendid. He's trying to make a comparison, and finally Spock's gets it, but Jim goes a little overboard with the sex against the bulkhead...and ripping off said uniform.
Lots of fun fluffy humor in this piece. Loved it.