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Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2012 4:39 PM Title: Matchmaker, Matchmaker?

Gary had so much potential and now he's dead. Poo.
Spooooock! He's just naturally charming!

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2012 1:56 PM Title: Matchmaker, Matchmaker?

Very nice the way Bones and Spock are caring for him.

What's Garys job? ;-)

Author's Response:

In the original TOS episode, Gary was the helmsman. Now Sulu will be.

Reviewer: geekygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2012 1:20 PM Title: Saying Good-Bye

This is awesome, I hope you update soon.

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2012 10:50 AM Title: A Mind is a Terrible Thing to Lose

Tall order. You have actually turned him around.

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2012 9:04 AM Title: The Day after the End of the World

You do comfort like nobody else.

Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2012 11:08 PM Title: Saying Good-Bye

Thanks for your RR entry.Ove this tale might even get the original movie out.

Reviewer: pintospirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2012 10:15 PM Title: Matchmaker, Matchmaker?

Oh man. Gary will get them together for sure now.

Reviewer: Wingstar102 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2012 8:50 PM Title: Matchmaker, Matchmaker?

Well, at least Gary's not going to make Jim miserable because of his interest in Spock. Not that Jim will admit it if he knows at all. Sorry if the last sentence didn't make any sense. My sick carcass is just waking up from a nap. This was a great little chapter to wake up to. LOL. Hope everything is OK in RL. Will beg and grovel for more!

Love and cherries,
Wingstar

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2012 2:10 PM Title: The Day after the End of the World

The description of things that remind you, and the sense of emptiness..very well done.

Reviewer: Mairin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2012 9:07 PM Title: A Mind is a Terrible Thing to Lose

I love that Gary gets to play match-maker and thus vindicating himself as a good guy gone bad. Feeling sorry for Jim though - thinking hes gone mad.

Looking forward to seeing how Gary convinces Jim that he's really there and not a figment.

Reviewer: TYaen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2012 7:18 PM Title: Saying Good-Bye

I've never seen the movie but thanks to your wonderful story I'm now quite curious about it.

I hope Spock can heal our captain soon =) *provides Jim with tissues*

Reviewer: jimali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2012 4:25 PM Title: A Mind is a Terrible Thing to Lose

Poor Jim! He surely feels as if this was a dream or he's going crazy. Gary is very sweet in this incarnation. I like him a lot!

Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2012 7:39 AM Title: Saying Good-Bye

I really like this story. I liked Gary's character and his and Kirk's relationship - I found it intriguing. Gary often seems to get.. The short end of the stick - I think is the saying? - so I'm glad you're exploring his character and relationship with Jim, and Jim's history at the same time. I like to think of them having been more than friends... And it's nice to read a fic wherein Kirk does love truly, madly, deeply, someone before Spock.
Looking forward to more of this.

Reviewer: Moonlightie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2012 4:10 AM Title: A Mind is a Terrible Thing to Lose

Wohoo, a new chapter :) I wonder if Gary is sticking around the whole time until Jim & Spock finally get together? That might take some time, after all Gary isn't dead that long. Hmmmm - don't let me wait too long to find out :)

Reviewer: Nessi of the lake called Ness Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2012 2:22 AM Title: A Mind is a Terrible Thing to Lose

Hello,

Two notes before I get to complementing you. You have 'rally' when it should be 'really' and 'Ay' when it should be 'At'. At least, that is what I think you mean.

You are totaly awesome, love this story so far (love most of your stories).

Your fan,

Nessi of the lake called Ness



Author's Response:

Thanks. I try to spot most typos, but once in awhile one gets by :)

Reviewer: SpirkTrekker42 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2012 2:20 AM Title: A Mind is a Terrible Thing to Lose

Hmm, that's either really sweet or really creepy, Gary.  Maybe both.  Although I don't think Gary will be thrilled to be replaced.   Hopefully he won't do anything to hurt Spock.  Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

No, Gary's going to help Spock win Jim.

Reviewer: cowgirl dressage Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2012 12:05 AM Title: Saying Good-Bye

It is so nice to see Gary written kindly.  He is a gentle haunt.  The last bit, with him waiting for Jim to find someone to love, about broke my heart.  Very nice.

Reviewer: Winterrose Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2012 10:12 PM Title: A Mind is a Terrible Thing to Lose

oh, now that must be a shocker to Jim - not exactly what he would be expecting.

thanks muchly,.

Reviewer: Wingstar102 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2012 8:26 PM Title: Saying Good-Bye

I know. Muse is such a slacker. Maybe I should start bribing her to work. LOL.

Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2012 8:14 PM Title: A Mind is a Terrible Thing to Lose

It sounds so cruel for Gary to say "someone to take my place"
Jim is definitely going to rage at that comment

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