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Reviewer: WeirdLittleStories Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2016 9:37 PM Title: one

I loved this line:  He was aware with a cut crystal clarity that if he didn't get Spock's psyche through this intact, the fact that his body was still alive wouldn't mean a damn thing.  That's an aspect of the situation that a lot of writers miss, and it's a measure of how well you get these guys that you included it.  Thanks for that.

 

Reviewer: skaylin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2013 12:19 PM Title: one

Your description of Kirk's state of mind and sensations are spot-on - and yes, I can imagine Kirk could choose such a twisted way of bringing them together. Guess it was a fantasy of his since Amok Time. Hehe.

Reviewer: nhrc Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2012 9:45 PM Title: one

It looks more like a battleground than an act of love. (Not in a bad way of course)

Reviewer: nhrc Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2011 6:43 PM Title: one

It's like a cloud of fog that enveloped the scene, left it blurred and soft like a Monet painting.

I like the use of Shakespeare quote

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2011 3:44 AM Title: one

I seemed to have missed this story...thank you so much for sharing...loved it..

Reviewer: titC Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2010 3:24 PM Title: one

wow!

Um, yes, that's it.

*reels a little*

Reviewer: croatine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2009 11:25 AM Title: one

That was... disturbing. In best way possible.

Good work.

Reviewer: Fenix21 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2009 5:24 PM Title: one

WOW!  I think that about covers it.  You have a gift...yes, definitely!

Reviewer: Starshadow Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2005 3:13 PM Title: one

edit--pon farr. I can't spell.

Reviewer: Starshadow Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2005 3:12 PM Title: one

Damn. Best pon far pwp since Greywolf the Wanderer's. Please --write more.

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