Date: 12/03/2014 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
This. Took my breath away. Can't believe I've never discovered it before.
So well written, so angsty. Leaves me hoping that maybe they might try it again. God, what a journey, though.
Thank you so much for writing this and sharing it.
Date: 10/29/2012 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really liked this, and how Jim didn't just instantly forgive Spock, but still didn't completely break things off (I like happy endings...) Also like how you pointed out that Spock was technically still a teenager
Really loved Sybok's character n.n he made me laugh a few times.
Date: 08/05/2012 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story! I really enjoyed the way you brought Sybok into it - a lovely touch, and having T'Pring be the one to discuss 'Vulcan biology' with Jim genius! Like other readers I wanted to scream at Spock and even more, at Sarek, who should have known better, given he illogically married for love himself, and he must have known about the bond when he touched Jim.
You did a great job of having Jim do the narration in 1st person - that worked really well, and his voice felt authentic to me. I appreciated him being clever at times and figuring things out/ I also enjoyed the epistolary aspect of it, with the various letters.
Thank you for such an enjoyable read! :)
Date: 08/05/2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is so wonderful. There is so much i love about this story.sybok is so cool and I was so glad to see T'pring with him and loving Jim as a brother. Jim was so strong after all that Spock put him threw. Just a perfect amount of everything. Xoxo
Date: 08/05/2012 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
absolutely fantastic! I hate Spock so much and at the same time, I understand him. and poor Jim, my heart breaks for him and I just want to take him in my arms and hold him tight and try to take away his pain.
love love love how Sybok is incorporated. so much angst. i read this before i went to bed and 2 hours later,I still can't sleep thinking about the story and all the anxious feelings that it brings up.
great writing. you did a wonderful job.