Date: 07/31/2012 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great beginning for the sequel...and, yes, there needs to ne more! You left me hanging!! :)
There are a lot of unanswered questions. I recall in 'Solstice' where Kirk had mentioned being a breeder (if I remember correctly). I was wondering if this meant that he could get pregnant. In Dune, the sisters were ordered to bear children (specifically daughters (Jessica was ordered to give birth to a girl, not a boy)) in order to breed and control the super being (Quisak Hadderack (this is not how you spell it but it is how you pronounce it)).
Will Jim eventually 'imprint' even though Spock imprinted I'm him? Spock seems definitely to be the dominant one.
Looking forward to more!
T'pau was trying to disprograming him, but really he was selected before he was born, so it is impossible even for her. So Jim is positioned now where he has to as the consort of the prince ambassador next in the line of the most powerfull house of the vulcan empire now under federation alliance... And with access to a several dignataries of the federation's worlds. Both Jim and Spock in my view are somehow imprinted to each other in there own terms. But we will see about who is the dominant...
My only problem with makeking a sequel is that i have non beta and as English is my second language i need the grammar help :( if you of someone i will apreciate it.
Date: 07/30/2012 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
WHAT? Why can't we get the body paint scene? :P
Killing you with a smile is a perfectly apt description of politics, if I may say so! XD
Jealous!Spock is great :)
thanks and sorry but i had little time then for more!
but i'm thinking in a sequel for the end of the year.