Date: 10/15/2013 6:35 AM Title: *Bonus* The Start Of All Things
I'm so glad I read this as a finished story, it would have been most frustrating to have to wait for new chapters to be written.
You're at your very best in the K/S-together scenes, lovingly written and tender the one on the sofa in chapter 5, breathtakingly involving the ones towards the end.
I laughed so much about that birthdaygift problem with the perfume popping up as the perfect solution and McCoy's reaction to it. - Not to mention the hilarious way you describe Kirk and Spock indulging in text messages while speaking to McCoy - now don't we all have experienced something like that with friends of ours???
I'm really looking forward to see you take this story "INTO DARKNESS"!