Date: 08/29/2012 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
Can I just say that the line about Jim caring more about Pike being proud of him than that his dad would have been melted my heart?
Don't much care what you do next, I'm sure I'll be happy with anything. And poor Bones... Spock deserved that punch
Date: 08/27/2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh my gosh Spock Prime please.
*makes grabby hands* :I
... Maybe you should do the xenophobia slightly first though. And SpockPrime can help nuSpock with it or something >:v I do love when they have some kinda relationship, including mentor type.
Yoooou have nothing to be sorry about with this chapter. No worries. It's sweet and plenty long and I'm so happy things have been resolveddd. (I'm still glad Bones punched Spock though. That was fun.) Thank you for writing.
Date: 08/27/2012 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 10
Spock Prime, Spock Prime, Spock Prime!!! =)
I just love that old Vulcan!!!
So please, please, please with cherry on top a whole chapter with Spock Prime and even more Spock Prime ;)
(U can add some phobia in later chaps..)
And btw: Nice chap!! You're a really good writer!
Date: 08/27/2012 5:10 PM Title: Joys of the Student Life
Yay! I am so happy thy are back together. I like the idea of some xenophobia... Especially if Spock gets injured and Jim gets all protective. *sigh* if its a really serious injury Spock Prime could stop on by for a transfusion, lol. Whatever you end up doing, keep up the great worK. Iabsolutely love this story. Great chapter too. More finger kisses would be appreciated. :) ahaha.
Date: 08/27/2012 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter. Not too short. I've thought on your idea to incorporate Star Trek OS works an on fanfiction told you about The Man Trap. This has the focus on McCoy's lost love. Would be a nice change and Spock gets attacked for good meaure but survives.
Date: 08/07/2012 7:51 PM Title: Joys of the Student Life
I really love this story. And I totally vote for you to write porn. ;) I think you're probably better at it than you think because your kissing scenes are very hot.
My only complaint is that I'd like to see more of Spock's point of view and personality. He seems extra distant in this particular story. Maybe a companion story showing the events from Spock's point of view?
Anyway, I just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying this story and to beg you to update soon. :)
I have considered this possibility. Especially now that we're entering movie verse. I predict there will be a lot of confusion, and Spock's POV would shed some light on a few things. Let me finish this one first, then I'll think about the next project ;)
Thank you for reading and for your kind words. As for the porn: I have tried, on numerous occasions, in other fandoms, and I have always failed miserably. My mind's blocking against it. It's not that I write it and it's bad. I just can't write it. I'm working on it ;)