Date: 07/12/2013 7:46 PM Title: Ten Reasons Tribbles Shouldn't Have Sex While Trying to be a Diplomat
....Well, first, happy B-day...althrough i little delayed... ;)
Second: you are a bad, bad, bad girl! To leave the chapter like that?! After one of the most amazing sex scenes ever! How could you! T_T
PD: of course, now Bones will know so... :D
Date: 07/12/2013 7:23 PM Title: New Missions, and Threats Unknown
I'm sitting at the border of my chair waiting for the moment in wich Spock finds out about Jim/Tribble... But of course, instead of that, i'm reading the most sensual scenes involving th two of them...>///< Nice! ;)
Date: 07/12/2013 6:17 PM Title: Klingons+Prolific Tribble=Migraine (TWT Part 2)
When Jim started to trilling i though spock would say something... I'm guessing he was to focus on touching Jim's pecs to notice ;)
Nice scene, very sexy. To bad the end...especially for the two of them...
Date: 07/12/2013 6:01 PM Title: The Trouble with Tribbles with a Twist...Part One
Jajajajajajaja! poor Jim! I imagine him hidding from the Tribble, watching it (her) from behind a door, a wall...XD
and what if the tribble "feels" him and starts to comunicate with him? LAMAO!
Date: 06/23/2013 12:00 AM Title: Of Epiphanies and Miracles
Fainting stoically from unlogic overload bahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah. Oh interesting twist on Ives' perspective on genetic mutation. It is always rather charring when one sees not so savory concequences of ones acts, isn't it.
Wow! Thank you for taking time to leave me multiple reviews during a chain read, lol. I am glad you like the story so far, and answers to many of your questions are coming soon now that the latest chapters are finally bringing the two storylines together. :) I hope you continue to enjoy and to hear your feedback again in future updates. <3
Date: 06/22/2013 11:55 PM Title: The Big Reveal
5? as in 5 babies? as in 5 little ones...oh boy, they don't do anything by halves do they looool. Hope that Bones, Uhura, Chekov, Sulu and Scotty are up for godparenting.
Hm, interesting that he looks like Jim from the other universe. Could it be that he is actually full human with tribble DNA spliced making him a hybrid? Why would they take him, given George Kirk. Questions just keep on poping up. It is 3am here, and I am not giving up until I have read it all...damn it lol
Date: 06/22/2013 9:26 PM Title: The Trouble with Tribbles with a Twist...Part One
Jim's animal side purrs and trills and is all cuddly :). How many of us can say the same for our animal sides :D. So, did Jim react to a smell that a tribble pet might have left on that aid guy, or is the aid the same hybrid as Jim?
Date: 06/18/2013 3:27 PM Title: Revelations, Proposals and Fallouts...Oh MY!
Wow that was sooooooo hot. I really loved that last chapter, loved Spock witholding sex until Jim says I do! Ace strategist.
Lol. I hoped people would like that. i know it might be a little OOC for him, but I dunno. Jim doesn't always capitulate easily...he as to be 'convinced' LOL. :) Thank you for reviewing, and also for being review number 345, which puts this story on the top ten most reviewed stories list here on the archive. *throws confetti* :) :) <3 <3
Date: 06/18/2013 7:13 AM Title: Revelations, Proposals and Fallouts...Oh MY!
Finally! I so waited for this update. And it was well worth waiting for! The sex was so hot and thankfully Jim agreed to bond with Spock. We also finally learned the true villain behind all this... it was great.
I hope you update again soon, I just need to know what happens next.
Now for the nitpicking: As far as I remember from "Amok Time" it is "appointed place", not "appropriated place". And it should be "just desserts" not "just deserts". But these were the only errors I could find. <3
Oh, good catch! I was writing in a hurry and I knew that appropriated didn't sound right, but it was getting down to crunch time so I was like fuck it, it technically works! lOLOL. Thank you thank you! Also, yes...villain is revealed. :) <3 Thanks for taking time to review and point out those errors. I shall fix them!
Date: 06/18/2013 4:41 AM Title: Revelations, Proposals and Fallouts...Oh MY!
nice, the pron was sexy, and I just can't get enough of tribble Kirk and his various woes
:) yay! I'm glad you like it. Oh..the cute tribbliness will be worse (better?) in the coming chapters, LOL. I have things planned for...things....
Date: 06/17/2013 11:59 PM Title: Of Peanut Allergies and Dr. Frankenstein
Enter the dubious member of starfleet, dun dun duuuunnnn! I wonder what nefarious things he has planned. bwhahah
I would like to point that Spock is a filthy cheater, not Jim minds, but still LOL
K'Lar you made Ives upset. How awful. You apologizes to him right now, you horrible little man.
Good to see an update but don't worry too much. Everyone knows how real life gets in the way and we all love you regardless. Unless Ives starts to cry. Then you're trouble LOL
Lol. Well, he's been there from the start, but damn...when was that start again? His role will get clarified soon enough. Spock *is* a cheater, but in a good way. LOL. Don't worry, no one fires K'Lar. LOLOLOLOLOL.
Yes, RL gets frustrating when it's in my way. I've got a deadline for the fic, set by myself for puposes my own and so...it's annoying to say the least, LOL. :) Thanks for reading, Ivy. :) <3
Date: 06/17/2013 10:48 PM Title: Revelations, Proposals and Fallouts...Oh MY!
Plotz? Oooh boy! This was a great chapter, full of being full of and full of interesting little factiods like Interspecies Partnership Law. I'm getting excited already! And no, no, no Ives and K'Lar fighting. That's not cool. Make them make up or something, please? I don't hate you, not in the slightest. As a fellow writer I understand RL getting in the way. As long as you haven't abandoned us completely, I'm cool. Thank you!
Lol. Thank you for being so sweet. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Don't worry. K'Lar isn't one to take things siting down. :) <3 I'll explain the Interspecies Partnership Law in the next chapter. I'm glad you liked that bit...I'm sure that it was wrapped in porn had nothing to do with you remember it, LOLOL. :) ;)