




Date: 06/07/2012 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Brilliance!! I love this kind of very in-keeping, heartfelt, gentle and atmospheric story!
Date: 06/07/2012 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awwww... this is so cute! The tone is just right - it feels like a TOS story and the characters are spot on! I think McCoy is just brilliant.
Well done, thanks for posting! :)





Date: 06/07/2012 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Such a sweet tale! Jim looking after Spock and then letting him hold his hand - it was so sweet! This calls for a sequel!
Date: 06/07/2012 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
"Really, those two and their damned indefinable relationship." YES
But he's a Vulcan and you were HOLDING HANDS! Geez, lovestruck fools indeed! :)





Date: 06/07/2012 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
I agree with Pamdizzle... Great job. Loved your story.





Date: 06/07/2012 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awe, how sweet. I'd love to see you continue this...Just saying. Well written, interesting and such lovely interplay between the characters. Great job.





Date: 06/07/2012 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
The pair of lovestruck fools are loveliest lovestruck fools.
Thank you for sharing.





Date: 06/07/2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Will there be more?? =)