Date: 08/23/2020 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
I simply loved this. The colours of the beach. Spock biting Kirk like a lion. The sexual tension. Very well done.
And the end. That moment of regret that the Captain feels now that Spock is back to his prim and proper self.
Date: 05/13/2012 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Damn, that was good!
And it leaves an aftertaste of existential frustration. My mind is ping-ponging yes-no-why not-cant possibly-what the hell-duty-better to have loved and etc-lose one's soul..
In one page you did what some have taken whole books to do.
Thank you so much for such an encouraging comment. You describe the exact effect I was trying for with this fic. I am so very pleased to hear you enjoyed it.
Date: 05/13/2012 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Please do a follow up. Where Spock and Jim come together realising Jims words of we can't let it take this from us, this isn't it's to share.
I'll certainly consider it, although I am such a great lover of UST that I don't kow how well I'd do with a sequel...
Date: 05/13/2012 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it very much.....makes me want to go and watch that episode right now....sequel please....
I hope you did rewatch the episode; it's one of my very favorites! (Even though I inexplicably chose to rewrite it...)
Date: 05/13/2012 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
And I love that we go back to see Kirk dealing with the experience but not Spock! You tease.
forgot to rate
Thanks for the responses and the rating!
Wow, a Spock point of view really would be interesting for this. I'll ponder over it for a bit.
Date: 05/13/2012 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
This would be a great prequel to a long fic. Just saying. =)
If they had a dormant attraction up until this point, were forced into experiencing it at 100% volume, went back to normal but still remember. They'd have a lot to deal with afterwards.
I'd love to witness that mess go through untangling.
Date: 05/13/2012 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
I vote for a sequel as well, Jim did say it was not to be shared, so they are supposed to get their alone time!!! lol I hope you write a sequel this is very well written^^
I think they're both regretting not having that alone time. I'm bad at sequels, but I'll certainly consider it, as peple are so pleasantly responsive. Thanks very much!
Date: 05/12/2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
AAAAAAAAAH! NEED A SEQUEL! *randy Tydomin got all worked up reading your story and now she requires satisfaction ;) *
This was brilliant - such lush description, and the characters were perfect. I can completely imagine this in an episode - Shatner doing that thing to Nimoy which he does to the femme fatale of the week, where it looks like he's devouring their entire face instead of just kissing...
Date: 05/12/2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story is so amazing - so beautiful and so hot!!!!! I absolutely loved it!! Maybe the best K/S short story I've read - your writing is wonderful!!!!!! And I absolutely loved the premise! Brilliant!!!