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Reviewer: LSPINGLES Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2020 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

I simply loved this.  The colours of the beach.  Spock biting Kirk like a lion.  The sexual tension.  Very well done.  

And the end.  That moment of regret that the Captain feels now that Spock is back to his prim and proper self.

 

Reviewer: Hypatia Kosh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2013 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

too bad about the not so happy ending, otherwise, I really enjoyed this, esp that you wove in the green of Spock's blood and Kirk's beach obsession--pretty neat!

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2012 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

Damn, that was good!

And it leaves an aftertaste of existential frustration. My mind is ping-ponging yes-no-why not-cant possibly-what the hell-duty-better to have loved and etc-lose one's soul..

In one page you did what some have taken whole books to do.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for such an encouraging comment.  You describe the exact effect I was trying for with this fic.  I am so very pleased to hear you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: ironland Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2012 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

 

So beautiful and so hot.  Thank you.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: magpie1600 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2012 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

Please do a follow up. Where Spock and Jim come together realising Jims words of we can't let it take this from us, this isn't it's to share.



Author's Response:

I'll certainly consider it, although I am such a great lover of UST that I don't kow how well I'd do with a sequel... 

Thank you!

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2012 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it very much.....makes me want to go and watch that episode right now....sequel please....



Author's Response:

I hope you did rewatch the episode; it's one of my very favorites! (Even though I inexplicably chose to rewrite it...)

Reviewer: Nejasna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2012 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

And I love that we go back to see Kirk dealing with the experience but not Spock! You tease. 

forgot to rate 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the responses and the rating!  

Wow, a Spock point of view really would be interesting for this.  I'll ponder over it for a bit. 

Reviewer: Nejasna Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2012 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

This would be a great prequel to a long fic. Just saying. =)

If they had a dormant attraction up until this point, were forced into experiencing it at 100% volume, went back to normal but still remember. They'd have a lot to deal with afterwards.
I'd love to witness that mess go through untangling.  

Reviewer: Martiangrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2012 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

Count me in as another vote for a sequel. This is too good to be left alone!



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you enjoyed it enough to want more!

Reviewer: Nocturnal Nightengale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2012 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

I vote for a sequel as well, Jim did say it was not to be shared, so they are supposed to get their alone time!!! lol I hope you write a sequel this is very well written^^

Author's Response:

I think they're both regretting not having that alone time.  I'm bad at sequels, but I'll certainly consider it, as peple are so pleasantly responsive.  Thanks very much! 

Reviewer: Mairin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2012 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Beautifully written; loved the build up and that it is Kirk who exerts control.

A sequel would be MUCH appreciated if you felt inclinded :)

Reviewer: Tydomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

AAAAAAAAAH!  NEED A SEQUEL!  *randy Tydomin got all worked up reading your story and now she requires satisfaction ;) *

This was brilliant - such lush description, and the characters were perfect.  I can completely imagine this in an episode - Shatner doing that thing to Nimoy which he does to the femme fatale of the week, where it looks like he's devouring their entire face instead of just kissing...

Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

An interesting premise!

Reviewer: murt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story is so amazing - so beautiful and so hot!!!!! I absolutely loved it!! Maybe the best K/S short story I've read - your writing is wonderful!!!!!! And I absolutely loved the premise! Brilliant!!!

Reviewer: Winterrose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2012 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Much better than I expected from the summary : ) !  Glad to see your work.

Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

LOVED that retelling. BUT THEY WERE SOOOO CLOSE! DAMNIT! Argh! Making me all frustraded. I love the sea thing. *shiver*soooo cloooose

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