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Reviewer: stardrop Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2012 11:37 AM Title: This is Hoeme

Beautiful 1st outing! Pay some attention to grammar and punctuation and your stories will shine. Can't wait to see more from you!

Author's Response:

Thank you, yes I know I have a lot to work on with grammar and punctuation, I hope to write more soon and hopefully get better. Thank you^^

Reviewer: Mtnhi32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2012 4:43 PM Title: This is Hoeme

Oh that was nice and very sweet. Very good first fic. I encourage you to write more if you have found that you enjoy it.

Author's Response: Thank you^^ I have in mind for another song fic. hopefully I'll have it out soon^^

Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2012 4:01 PM Title: This is Hoeme

I thought this was very sweet and I enjoyed the jumps throughout their evolving relationship. I did notice, however, that you need to work on sentence structure and punctuation as it relates to periods. There were instances where you ended a sentence and began another that was really just a continuation of the sentence previous.

Still, great story, great premiss and I love the song too, by the way.

Author's Response: Thank you very much^^ Yes grammar and punctuation are my worst!!! I hope I improve as I write lol my English professors complained about them too. I'm going to more song fics I think and gradually work my way up^^ Thanx again for your thoughts^^

Reviewer: Sera Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2012 1:33 PM Title: This is Hoeme

your storry is beautyful.
thank you


Author's Response: Thank you^^

Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2012 1:16 PM Title: This is Hoeme

That was so sweet! :3
It was really adorable reading about how they got together and their "movie night"
Very nice!

Author's Response: Thank you^^

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