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Reviewer: jimali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2012 5:09 PM Title: Vulcan, Thou Art Loosed

Wow. Just. Wow. This was soooo hot! I need a cold shower after this.

And you had to spoil it and let Sullivan escape! Now I can't wait for the next chapter and it's the weekend and you probably won't have time to write - I hope you'll have the next chapter up by Monday!

Thank you for this.



Author's Response:

Working on Tribble fic for Monday, lol. Next chapter to this probably not until...Tues or Wed... lol Sorry I gave this one two updates, so I figure I gotta work on one for the other one now! Thank you for the review and I'm glad you liked it. Happy Weekend!

Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2012 3:46 PM Title: Vulcan, Thou Art Loosed

I am very satisfied ;)

Author's Response:

I am happy to hear it! :)

Reviewer: Wingstar102 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2012 1:34 PM Title: Enterprise to the Rescue

Thanks honey. I hate being sick too, but you guys brighten my day. :)

Reviewer: ivycross Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2012 1:28 PM Title: Enterprise to the Rescue

You are too kind, thanks. Perhaps my intelligent is something more akin to a tribble?

Speaking of tribbles, if you update the tribble fic then I will be willing to wait for the next chapter to this one. What am I saying? I am willing to wait regardless, but updating the tribble fic would make the wait more tolerable. Either way take your time. =^_^=



Author's Response:

Lol. I'm taking a couple days off. I went a long time between writing and then I popped out for the first few days of the week. Brain needs a break, lol. Need to sort out all of my ideas. I'm gonna have to put my tribble fic in an outline to keep it together, but I'm hoping for an update on that by Monday at the latest. In the meantime, I'm gonna play some video games, ahahhaha.

 

Reviewer: Bastet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2012 2:17 AM Title: Vulcan, Thou Art Loosed

Sex scene-molten hot. Sullivan (as Scooby would say) Ruh roh!



Author's Response:

Lol. Thank you :)

Reviewer: ironland Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2012 1:24 AM Title: Vulcan, Thou Art Loosed

When I readed this chapter: Mmmm...sweet Vulcan....sweet Jim...cute nerdXDDDDDD...cute TomcatXDDD...hot...hot...WTF!SULLLIVVVVVVVVAN! Shoot him!

Thank you very much and waiting more.



Author's Response:

Lol. Thank you for the review and the rating. I'm glad you thought it was hot...:)

Reviewer: cowgirl dressage Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2012 12:33 AM Title: Vulcan, Thou Art Loosed

sigh, I can die happy now.



Author's Response:

But, please don't, lol

Reviewer: ivycross Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2012 12:10 AM Title: Enterprise to the Rescue

That was very satisfying.

I also realized later that I mistyped what I was trying to say in my last comment. I loved the last chapter even if I am dumber than a box of rocks. LOL

I cannot wait for the showdown with Sullivan.



Author's Response:

I believe your intellegence is far superior to a box of rocks, lol. Showdown for Sullivan coming soon, but first I need to update Tribble fic. Maybe by today or tomorrow. I don't know, I'm having a hard time focusing this morning. Might be a better day to set aside for reading...

Reviewer: dragonbriar Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2012 11:14 PM Title: Vulcan, Thou Art Loosed

"He watched as Spock took advantage of the new position, eyeing Jim’s jouncing erection"

I believe you meant bouncing.

 



Author's Response:

Nope, I meant jouncing. It means the same thing as bobbing but sounds...I don't know, juicier to me. i really do not like the word bobbing it sounds funny when I use it in porny scenes lol

Reviewer: Wingstar102 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2012 6:45 PM Title: Vulcan, Thou Art Loosed

Hotness beyond hot. Wow. I'm going to have to have a cold.shower, but only after my sick carcass takes a nap. Hot!! Sullivan is going to get his. Yay! And can we maybe have some wonton Jim? That would be just as awesome. But Spock shouldn't worry about finding a way to ask Jim to bond. Just open your mouth and say it! LOL. Fantastic chapter! Will beg and grovel for more!

Love and cherries,
Wingstar

Author's Response:

Lol. We'll see! I'm sorry you're not feeling well. I hate being sick. :(

Reviewer: pintospirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2012 6:40 PM Title: Vulcan, Thou Art Loosed

Um yeah that was &@:;'?. *stumbles to take a cold shower* Sullivan's loose, not good.

Author's Response:

*hands you monopoly money for your water bill* lol

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2012 12:32 AM Title: Is It a Whore's Uniform If You, In Fact, Feel Inclined to Wear It?

Brilliant, brilliant chapter...Man, what a roller coaster..You did manage to capture so many things in this chapter....oh you sneaky Vulcan...Sullivan....such a fool...cocky bastard...

now of course to the harem outfit...omg....you are sooooo mean to end it there...

 

Very hot last line....you rocked this chapter girl...can't wait for more..and I am up to date...phew...



Author's Response:

Thank you! This chapter took me...longer than I care to admit...lol. And, it was almost 4k words on its own and it was the end of the afternoon--couldn't go any farther. Chapter 15 should be up today though for sure.

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2012 12:13 AM Title: Public Enemy Number One

Oh, this was fun...so who is the fool now Sullivan???? The look on his face when they said attempted murder......priceless I am sure...very exciting chapter when Jim just made it..and the Galileo was gone...so close...

You did an awesome job....oh cool another chapter....off I go..



Author's Response:

Lol. I love your reviews, thank you for putting them here. :)

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2012 4:49 PM Title: Is It a Whore's Uniform If You, In Fact, Feel Inclined to Wear It?

Wanton. I love that word.



Author's Response:

It's probably one of my favorites, I'm pretty sure I've used it in every fic I've written, which probably isn't a good thing, but I can't help it...especially in the same sentence as Spock. lol

Reviewer: jimali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2012 3:41 PM Title: Is It a Whore's Uniform If You, In Fact, Feel Inclined to Wear It?

I'm so happy you're back to posting and that your hubby is happily out of the way at work!

I loved this chapter, it was a real coming-back-gift. Thank you for getting Sullivan caught and arrested and for the display of the harem clothes.... (Yummy!).

And Jim was so Jim with the apologising and the bad conscience - and Spock was delightful in the way he answered. *Loves*

Look forward to the next chapter which will hopefully not contain any interruptions (you wouldn't be so cruel, would you?) and lots and lots of hotness.



Author's Response:

Lol. I'm glad you liked it and it is good to have hubby back to work! Next chapter probably tomorrow, since I'm still feeling the creative juice for this story...not hard to do when porn in on the line... :P

Reviewer: CMM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2012 2:25 PM Title: Is It a Whore's Uniform If You, In Fact, Feel Inclined to Wear It?

Taut muscles, not taught. Quit trying to teach Spock's muscles, lol.



Author's Response:

But I would really like it if they could learn to dance...

Reviewer: wanda72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2012 2:24 PM Title: Is It a Whore's Uniform If You, In Fact, Feel Inclined to Wear It?

"Also, if you do find errors, please bring them to my attention!"  I found an error: you stopped there.  LOL.  *Stumbles off to a cold shower.*



Author's Response:

Lol. Nice catch, ahahah. :P

Reviewer: ironland Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2012 1:29 PM Title: Is It a Whore's Uniform If You, In Fact, Feel Inclined to Wear It?

 

XDDDD, luck Jim. Spock wrapped blue silk ,Spock was in his arms ,and Spock wanted to be made wanton. This is a surreallism moment.

Welcome back.

 

Author's Response:

LOL, thank you! It's good to be back and writing silky, surreal porn again, ahahah

Reviewer: Mairin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2012 10:00 AM Title: Is It a Whore's Uniform If You, In Fact, Feel Inclined to Wear It?

So glad your hubby go a new job; not just so you have an income again but because we get this........yay.



Author's Response:

Thank you, on both fronts. It's nice to be home alone during the day again...or well, as alone as one can be with a four year old running around...Ah...kindergarten next year...

Reviewer: Nocturnal Nightengale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2012 2:09 AM Title: Is It a Whore's Uniform If You, In Fact, Feel Inclined to Wear It?

You are such a tease but that's ok lol^^

I understand needing to tie up loose ends before the obligatory hot sex^^ which by the way so looking forward to ^_~



Author's Response:

I'm not a tease, lol! There will be hot sex! I swear! An entire chapter of hot, hot sex! Jeesh...

 

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