Date: 09/25/2009 11:36 PM Title: none
This was very well written, as is typical of your stories. You pulled a very unique twist on the genderbending thing; when everyone was changed I expected the story to use a excuse similar to that of the Procrustean Petard in ST New Voyages 2, where one member of the crew saw its male characteristics reinforced instead of being changed. You get points for originality. But I think I just can't wrap my mind about Jim actually having been a girl all along. It makes me completely off-balance. I love my manly TOS Kirk too much :-D
Date: 02/05/2009 1:46 AM Title: none
Would you believe that this reminds me of one of my Star Trek books? I have a huge collection of vintage novels, and one set is called The New Voyages. It is, basically, a collection of short stories. One of them was actually very similar to this. I thought this was very well written, and actually quite touching. A marvelous read!