Date: 04/04/2012 9:51 PM Title: Standalone
You are brilliant. I could hear every word in their voices, and see every expression you so effectively described on their faces. You've done their characters so well and reastically! I think my favorite part is Kirk trying to outlogic Spock as he so loves to outlogic computers. Actually my favorite part is the intensity of how they want each other. It's so hot, and beautiful.
Also, this line: "Everything about Spock right now seems tense and black and blown open, the fragments of an explosion coalescing into one solid perfect thing opposite him." There were lots more of equal amazingness. I hope you write more!
Author's Response: I hope I write more too, this is kinda fun! Thanks for the compliments on characterization...that's the most important part of fic for me. And yes! I wanted it to be hottt. You are brilliant.
Date: 04/04/2012 4:31 PM Title: Standalone
Well, if this is your first story I for one can't wait to see what experience will do to make more of such wonderful writing!
Very intense, very hot, and very good! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I must admit, this is not my first story PERIOD. Just the first story in this fandom. I don't know anything about the fandom trends/tropes/etc. But I do write lots of fic elsewhere :) Thank you for the review. You're wonderful.
Date: 04/04/2012 3:45 PM Title: Standalone
Nice. If you want feedback, I guess you were exaggerating about the rivulets of blood because blood loss is no joke (just ask me, lol), but other than that, I liked the setup and explosion and the kinky bits.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing :) And yeah, there was a hella lot of blood, huh? I guess I was going for exaggeration to emphasize Spock's more than human strength. I appreciate crit very much, though. Thanks again!