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Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2012 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is great! I'm lookingf forward to seeing the fic unfold!

I like how spock instantly feels such attraction and connection to jim.... And i love that jim is his 'golden one' :)

oh and it should be a 'maximum' of 3 hrs reading not minimum

Author's Response:

Lol, good catch! I will fix that asap. Glad you like it and thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2012 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Sorry line separation messed up I was alluding to fanfic idea that Vulcans have time sense as a separate CNS sense unlike us humans. Won't be able to think of sex scenes now without the muscle memory concept intruding and creasing me up. Read an interesting book club book recently about memory loss, mixed the two approaches and was epic fail. Yours in contrast is much more accurate. For total damage to brain Variable Meanings is difficult to fault, but comes with cardiac arrest warning for heartbreak element.

Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2012 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

Actually given the remit your separation of time
Memory and muscle memory from learned memory and emotional suppression is a good approach. Memory suppression as in fugue differs from destructive process loss. Spock's situation woul have more in common with fugue. This is looking very good. Wish that exams were over so I could complete stories I have on desk top . Would love a message via contacts as I am interested in how others approach Fics. Do u beta?

Author's Response:

"Actually given the remit your separation of time"....huh? Lol, sorry, I don't know what you mean here. As far as muscle memory is concerned--precisely what I'm going for and I'm going to have more fun with it in the next chapter for sure.

You can contact me any time. I do beta, actually, when asked. I have a strict window, however, and if you want a chapter beta'd by next day, you need to have it to me 24 hours ahead of when I'll be reading it. For instance, say you have a chapter you want posted by Tuesday evening, I would need you to get it to me by Sunday night or early Monday morning. The reason is, I'm not able to do any writing or reading over the weekend or in the evenings, eatern time zone. ;)

Reviewer: CORGIMOM Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2012 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is really good. I think you have created a believable amnesic Spock. His "differences", while there are done with a subtle touch. Nothing really all that blatant. Vulcan control and behavior is after all a learned cultural response. They weren't always like that. I love what you're doing with this and will happily follow along on the journey. :~)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'll be happy to have you along for the ride. ;)

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