Date: 03/16/2012 8:45 PM Title: Plotting the Trap
NO; the ideal punishment for Matthews is to be sent to a mindhealers' enclave on Vafer-Tor (New Vulcan), where he will be surrounded by pointy-eared demons trying to "re-educate him"--and he can't leave until he's no longer a bigoted asshole, which will take about 60 years.
Lol. Another tally for rehabilitation...of a sort...then. :D
Date: 03/16/2012 8:13 PM Title: The First Incident
It seems to me that Matthews is broken and so rather than a camp where he is repeatedly raped which would just re-inforce his delusions by the way, how about a planet run by "aliens" whose job it is to fix broken people?
I've never been an eye for an eye person in the straight sense - prefering a more lateral approach -cause you know people who are broken are that way in the context of whatever shit they've had to deal with during their own lives and maybe less resilient that others. Thats just my view anyway.
Great chapter-can't wait for the next one
I tend to agree with this approach. And I will mark a tally under 'rehabilitation'. LOL I just went back and double checked for errors. You're such a sweetie for not mentioning the 5,000 typos I just fixed. Holy crap.
Date: 03/16/2012 3:50 AM Title: Prime Suspect
Oh man, you almost had me in tears with this one! I was hoping the cavalry (namely Jim and Barry) would swoop in and stop the ignition just before it went off, nabbing Matthews in the process. And Spock's beautiful hands . . . especially after what I said about them in my last comment. Kudos for your volunteer work, but as soon as you can squeak it in, please update and don't keep us hanging too long! *begging puppy dog eyes*
It's always darkest just before dawn. Don't worry, Giotto and Jim are on the case. Anyway, I love being a volunteer, but OMG it's been f'n crazy this week and I'm just looking forward to the end of Saturday. I'm going to be dealing with confusion and disappointment from hormone laden middle schoolers ALL DAY. God, someone get me a drink...
The fact of the matter is that after Saturday, I'm going to need to write just to regain some type of sanity. You know how they say misery is great inspiration---it's not a lie.
Date: 03/16/2012 3:19 AM Title: Investigation Underway, Ensign Matthews and Giotto Gets Laid
I knew it! I knew Komack was involved, that pos! I hope the weasel finds his spine and admits to ignoring that psyche rec and not cover it up. I don't mind het sex sprinkled in with my slash, especially when it's good and it's with my new fave het couple, Barry Cuppycake and naughty and oh-so nice Marionette. I never really thought of Giotto that much, but you've made him into a very convincing white knight that I'm hoping will save our definitely not a damsel in distress Vulcan. Speaking of Vulcan, I was wondering if when Spock steeples his fingers, knowing how sensitive they are, is he deriving pleasure from their manipulation (kind of like telepathic masturbation?) and does Jim ever notice?
I'm glad you liked the chapter and the dash of het.
As for Spock's hand steeple: I have theory. It is my understanding that the hands sensitivity have more to do with their ties to Vulcan telepathy, than thier actual sesne of touch. My guess is that Vulcan sense of touch is probably enchanced when their hands are in contact with other senient being and that contact with their own hand/body and inanimate objects don't actually cause the same sensation. That's just my theory though. I honestly haven't done extensive reading into what the web has to offer on Vulcan telepathy and biology.
Date: 03/16/2012 2:03 AM Title: A Lovers Interlude
Sorry I was AWOL for a little bit, but RL can be a female dog, you know? Anyhoo, what a tasty chapter and I know I'm being greedy, but I was hoping for a sex in the shower scene with all of that wet skinned groping and washing each other with bubbly soap; maybe next time. Oh well, on to the next chapter and as always, thanks for sharing!
Oh ho, don't you worry. I happen to love Charlaine Harris and I was just thinking the other day...in the shower, of course, that I really should put in a very descriptive shower scene for this story, lol. Quite a few of you have requested more sex, so what can I say? I guess there's going to have to be at least one more fairly graphic sex scene before it's over.
Date: 03/14/2012 7:59 PM Title: Prime Suspect
Mathews is now deadly, can Jim and Giotto get to him before he gets to Spock. How will we survive until the next update.
Great story really enjoing it loads
Yes, someone with nothing to lose is indeed worlds apart from those who do.
Date: 03/14/2012 7:26 PM Title: Prime Suspect
You probably meant shuttle bays instead of shuttle babys--at least I hope so. I don't want any infants in Matthews' path. More sex, please. :)
Lol. There will be sex. Lots and lots of recovery sex......soon.
Yeah, shuttle bay...christ. I was in a hurry when I posted. Will fix when I have a chance.
Date: 03/14/2012 9:34 AM Title: The First Incident
So I see Giotto got humped, loved both stories.
Back to this story, I actually enjoyed the interlude, it was sweet and shows Giotto's softer side and set the scene for the next part. Also I really don't mind having the story take a side trip every now and then; it makes Jim and Spock's story all the sweeter for having to wait - a little, not a lot, I don't want to be waiting a lot-ok?
I'm 1700 words into the next chapter and don't worry, there is a very sweet K/S moment that included which will bring on some sweet before things start to get a little sour for our boys.
Date: 03/14/2012 12:28 AM Title: Investigation Underway, Ensign Matthews and Giotto Gets Laid
So I love this. Having Uhura and Spock discover his homosexuality was amazing and I loved Spock's oblivious-ness. You make all the characters very believable and I adore that Spock and Kirk got together~ You've made me genuinely hate Matthews and his crimes are not to drastic to be farfetched or to small to be insignificant. I can't wait for the next chapter and I thank you for sharing this with us readers~
I'm glad you like it so far and hope that I continue to hear from you. Making the characters believable is something I'm trying very hard to do. While Matthews hasn't tried to shoot Spock out an airlock, without a spacesuit whilst strapped to a missile, he is about to strike again and it will be significantly more violent. If I'm not able to finish the chapter by the end of today, you can expect it up tomorrow for sure.
Thanks again for reading and the kind words as well.
Date: 03/13/2012 10:38 PM Title: Investigation Underway, Ensign Matthews and Giotto Gets Laid
I like Mary, your Orion, and the details about her...
And Komack! Grrrr...
Looing forward to the next update (and more k/s!) :)
I am glad that you like my OC. I wasn't sure how they'd be received... :)
Date: 03/13/2012 4:14 AM Title: Investigation Underway, Ensign Matthews and Giotto Gets Laid
uh, there was something I wanted to comment on, but the Giotto scene distracted me.. mmh what was it... mmh.. err..
thanks for updating!
Oh good. I'm glad you fell the bait and switch! :)
Date: 03/13/2012 2:38 AM Title: Investigation Underway, Ensign Matthews and Giotto Gets Laid
I love this chapter . Barry is kick-ass. I don't mind good het-sex and that was GREAT. Made me all hot and bothered. xoxoxoxox
I'm glad the het sex didn't offend, lol. Here, have an ice pack...
Date: 03/12/2012 10:31 PM Title: The First Incident
I'm glad you took my review with good humor--I only did it because you said to feel free to gripe if I hated it and we'd both feel better. The story is actually excellent (and I'd still pay money to see Spock humping Giotto). Pleeeeeease?
Lol. I smell a crack!fic challenge. God...
Date: 03/12/2012 8:31 PM Title: Investigation Underway, Ensign Matthews and Giotto Gets Laid
Yeah, I hated it. Spent too much time laying out Matthews' issues--nobody cares about his issues; he's a twerp. Don't give him any more opportunities to look like the victim. And I doubt if Moack would let him slide if he was that obvious about his hatreds. Also, i don't care if Giotto is getting laid; it's not germaine to the story unless he lets Spock hump him during Pon Farr (which I'd actually pay money to see). Whew! You're right. I feel better.
Actually, there's not much the matter with this chapter; it just takes the focus off Jim and Spock, which those of us who are caught up in this don't want to happen.
LMMFAO! "unless he lets Spock hump him during Pon Farr (which I'd actually pay money to see)." Yes, me too. AHHAHA. Next chapter, you will like, but not because Giotto gets humped by Spock in heat. :)