Date: 03/01/2012 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
very interesting start here! I imagine you're gonna get a lot of monkey-mail and grumbles here, but I find it most intriguing. you gave plenty of warnings. maybe change the universe to read mirror Abrams' universe? other'n that, off to the races we go!
moar pls! XD as is my custom, star rating to follow once story is finished -- not used to the posting in pieces yet.
Date: 03/01/2012 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
After 17000 words I would have to put this in the porn without plot category. A little more attention to spelling and grammar would be appreciated. This should be classified as an "Alternate Universe" story, since neither of the main characters are the ones depicted in either TOS or STXI.
Date: 02/28/2012 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMFG, I LOVE THIS. ALL THAT DARKNESS OF SPOCK WHAT A FUCKING TURN ON. JIM ABOUT BLEW MY DULL MIND . JUST LOVE HIM TAKING OVER SPOCK AND BEING THE STRONGER OF THE TWO. I LIKED THAT JIM BEING THE STONGER ALSO WAS THE BETTER PERSON . MAYBE HE CAN TEACH SPOCK THAT JUST CAUSE YOU CAN DOES NOT MEAN YOU SHOULD. LOOK SO FARWARD TO MORE STORY'S FROM YOU. XOXOXOXOXOXXO
Date: 02/27/2012 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Needs a huge leap of open mindedness and I predict some disruntlement to say the least. However it is a very different take on the K/S dynamic within the BDSM gendre. Pulls a lot of skirted over asoects of Spock's actions from various locations. A good piece