Date: 03/22/2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 11
Awwwwwwww..... I am probably one of the few people on this site who can honestly say I think it's nice that you left the details in the last chapter to our imaginations. And I will not be running off to write a "flying butt kick" ficlet, tempting as that may be, because I'm guessing that every other author on this site has had the same idea lolol.
On the whole, this was a nice, understated read which came close to watching the episodes.... you know the hand-holding and fluff and even slash is there, you just keep missing it out of the corner of your eye lololol. Lovely story.
Well I'm glad you liked the fact there was no fight scene, to be honest I'm really not good at those unless it's verbal fighting so there probably won't ever be a fight scene from me. I'm better at fluff honestly. And honestly there is already so many fics with Jim kicking butt on Spock's behalf, on and off this site. Do we really need more? I didn't think we did, and I was happy with just having the outcome of the fight and not the whole thing.
I hope you mean understated in a good way. But you gave me one of the biggest complements you could by saying you thought it came close to watching the episodes. I am still smiling. Thank you so much.
Date: 03/21/2012 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Okay, I gotta say, that was cheap, ending one chapter with Spock on the edge of death and then SKIPPING THE WHOLE KIRK RIPPED SHIRT FIGHT SCENE. How can you deny us the patented Kirk Tries To Charm The Pants off The Aliens shtick and then, when that does not work, the Kirk Exclusive FLYING BUTT KICK? I demand flying butt kicks! Also, manic, flushed grins. And ripped uniforms. VERY IMPORTANT!
Oh, and it's spelled vial, not vile--or phial, if you wanna be all steampunk.
I'm not good with fight scenes unless it's verbal, so you probably will not see any "flying butt kicks" from me.
Date: 03/20/2012 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 10
Yeah, Romulan Ale to the rescue! (sorry, but I could not resist ... *chuckle*)
LOL, I didn't notice that I had done that, but now that you mention it it does sound like Romulan ale. That is perfectly alright.
Date: 03/19/2012 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Your health should be more important than a fan fiction. I don't think the readers would complain if you take your time for RL issues. Lie down and take a nap, or do whatever you need to get better. Don't worry about fics.
Well I figured that since I was home and that I promised to post I owed to the loyal readers of this story. Thank you though. I just dont like going back on my promises.
Date: 03/19/2012 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 9
I swear I didn't want to say anything, but in the end I couldn't. The story is not bad, the plot's interesting, but would you mind learn to spell the verb "promise", please? Every time you type it in the chapter's note, you type it with a "c" instead of an "s". It's annoying as hell.
Look I dont want to be mean but I am in alot of pain, I only posted today because I had "Promised" I was not paying attention to what I was writing beyond explaining why I was posting at night instead of the afternoon like usual. Please next time send me a private message or dont do this. I thank you for reading the story, and am glad you like it.