Date: 01/07/2012 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Let's have it for positive reinforcement!
Lovely story, I especially loved the snow and the horses.
Perfect tension and resolution.
Hahaha I am so late on responses here... anyway, thanks so much! I'm very glad to hear you enjoyed it! And positive reinforcement is the best way to train your Vulcan. ;)
Date: 12/30/2011 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Aw, that was gorgeous! Beautiful first-time story, lovely emotions and perfect for this particular winter night! Thank you very much for posting. (:
Wow, how did I miss this review last year? Ah well - thank YOU for commenting! I'm so glad it improved your winter night! :)
Date: 12/27/2011 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awww :) This is a lovely fic - so sensitive and emotional, yet also familiar and cosy like an old woolly jumper. I love the descriptions of the snow and the scenery - I can completely picture it as I read - and the little snippets that go off on a tangent, relating to other bits of the trekverse. But best of all is how the characters ease into their roles so effortlessly - I can really feel their relationship, their backstory and their attitudes changing as the story progresses. This is a keeper!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for all your lovely comments! I can think of no higher praise than your woolly jumper comparison - that's exactly the feeling I was going for. :D I'm glad you appreciated the descriptions and trekverse details, and that their relationship felt natural.
Date: 12/27/2011 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
“Any sound experimental design dictates multiple trials, however.” Spock murmured
Schrodinger's cat! lololololol
Lovely story, well written!
Author's Response: Hooray for science! Thank you for commenting, and I'm glad you thought it was well written!
Date: 12/27/2011 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
“I could use a shower,” he said. Truth with a side of suggestion.
“Yes,” Spock said, matter-of-factly.
Hehehe. Gives a whole new spin on that turbolift scene in Star Trek 6 and the look exchanged between the two. This was great.
Author's Response: I know, right? Such a Space Husbands moment... thank you for commenting!