Date: 07/25/2015 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
This so needs a sequel. Small spiders large mirrors and the expertise of an arachnologist. maybe the creatures shed coats. Maybe they hide in jeffries tubes and bite tellerite diplomates on way home from babel? What's for certai. They need to reappear and Spock owes Jim an apology.
Wow, what great ideas! I actually did start to do a sequel a few months back, then my computer fried itself and I lost a lot of my started stories including the sequel to this one. But I will admit, your ideas are better than the one that I had.
Really glad that you enjoyed the story and more than happy that you took the time to write to me.
Date: 07/26/2013 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is the most horrific/hillarous/cute story I've ever read.
You did a very good job with Kirk's emotions.
I hope you write a sequel.
Now there, you have a good idea - how about a prequel?
Date: 05/24/2012 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this! I sympathize with Kirk but if I were him I would have used a phaser. When I find one I douse it with poison and then squish it as a precaution (sometimes I run across superspiders). Spock shouldn’t have just shrugged it off when he came across the little spider cause humans maybe irrational by nature but Captain Kirks irrational fear has merit. Besides I can see Kirk step on a 4 centimeter spider, a 4ft spider that looks about to lunge I’d run through the bulkheads too. OMG to have thousands of those things running around and find a way to the vents *shudder* my skin crawls just thinking about it. You should write a sequel or companion piece about just that! It be funny for Spock to find it fascinating while Kirks freaking out (gosh I can be so mean).
I never thought about it, but it would make for a dilly of a sequel wouldn't it? LOL
Date: 12/09/2011 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
I don't really mind spiders that much (honest!)--and I love reptiles and rodents (most)--but you just reminded me I have an insect phobia. This story is really shudder-worthy, the atmosphere is perfect.
-but you just reminded me I have an insect phobia.
Then my job is done! LOL
Date: 12/04/2011 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
YECKS, WHAT THE HELL MAN. LOL. NOW I'M GOING TO HAS NIGHTMARES. LOL. NO NOT REALLY ONLY CAUSE I AM SAFE AND SOUND IN MY BED READING ABOUT THIS SCARY HAIRING THING. LOVE SPOCK TRYING TO GET JIM TO PUT THE HEAD BACK ON HIS SHOULDER THAT WAS CUTE. XOXOXOXOXOX