Date: 11/01/2019 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really nice story! Very gentle, very touching.
[Report This]Date: 02/11/2015 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 2: I Swear It To You
Awwww this is so sweet~ I love it how Jim is the only one Spock would ever cry in front of and how Jim is so devoted to him. I feel the love radiating off of those two. I can't help but smile :)
Author's Response:
Thank You. SO Happy to find your feedback! Thank You!
Date: 05/07/2014 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
very nice story.
Author's Response:
Thanks. SO nice to have new feedback on any story, esp. one from some time ago. Thank YOU XX
Date: 10/22/2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 5: Loving You
(But that's how I feel about your story)
Five heartbeat.
Author's Response:
THANK YOU XXXX
Date: 10/22/2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 4: The Depths Of Heat That Is No Fever...
Four heartbeat. (I hope you do not think it kitsch)
Author's Response:
I don't mind if it is kitsch xx
Date: 10/22/2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 3: Haven
Three heartbeat.
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to send this feedback xx
Date: 10/22/2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 2: I Swear It To You
Two heartbeat.
Author's Response:
Sweet idea - THANK YOU xxx
Date: 10/22/2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
One heartbeat.
Author's Response:
THANKS xx
[Report This]Date: 01/17/2013 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
Premise good, but writing is sub-par. It was very kitchy and not naturally sounding.
Author's Response:
Well some days of writing are better than others. Thanks anyway. It is what it is.
Date: 03/15/2012 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is one of the ones that I read before and wanted to review but didn't have time. It's a good premise, but it's Jim's dialogue again that keeps me from being transported into story. :)
Author's Response:
I re-read it last night myself... I don't know if I'd change the dialogue. Don't think so, but I might well write a similar scene a little differently in any future story I could yet find myself writing... I always do alter slightly with each story.