Date: 12/26/2011 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 9
"Someone should look more masculine in this relationship, and you fit the bill perfectly." Says Kirk to his eyeshadow wearing lover. *rotflmfao*
Somehow Kirk and gazelle don't compute in my mind, but the story was very funny and cute. Looking forward to reading more fics by you!
Author's Response: I wrote this story a long time ago, and to my surprise I happened to fall upon another story, (thinking that is freaky, wish I could remember the title) that also referenced Jim as a gazelle....and damn, completely forgot about the eyeshadow wearing lover..oops.
Date: 11/15/2011 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 6
Sweet! I just wonder - 1) Just what size is Spock wearing if his boot is big enough to completely cover a letter? 2) If the letter was in an envelope, why is it not readable now? I suppose only the envelope would be dirty ... Sorry for nitpicking, but these questions somehow distracted me from your otherwise cute story!
Author's Response: Spock happened to get the piece of gum stuck during his shift and when he arrived in his cabin that is when he got it stuck under his boot. But you are right you'd think he'd notice something sticky under his boot or that he was to dignified to admit it and start pulling the gum off on the bridge...or was about to do it when Jim walked in...and that is when it got stuck to his boot...and then it pretty much made a mess to the enveloppe and got all over his fingers and was just a mess when he tried to remove it from the enveloppe...if you have a better idea that would be great...that is why beta's are for...thanks dear friend for noticing my errors...
Date: 11/15/2011 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 5
"Who do you think he's gay with?" ROTFLMFAO!!! Win! Love that line!
Hope we do get to know Jim's poem ...
Author's Response: Thank you dear..chapter 6 is up....poem not there yet..
Date: 11/13/2011 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh, lovely! I adore your Bones (even though his breakfast manners leave a lot to be desired).
Date: 11/13/2011 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh, you can just feel poor Spock and Jim each dying inside as McCoy raves on.... so funny and so sad at the same time!
Can't wait for next chapter?
Author's Response: Thanks my friend...chapter four will be up tomorrow...