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Reviewer: niphredil Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2012 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 5

I think M'Benga found the answer. Now I hope they would listen to him. I like the picture ! Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading the story so far. Sorry for the hiatus to this story. I have updated a new chapter. 

Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2012 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 5

Poor Jim being talked over by Bones. I enjoy your Fics clear simple style write more

Author's Response:

You are very kind to think so. I am sorry for the long hiatus, but I have updated a new chapter..

Reviewer: ironland Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2012 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great star! Please,please, where is the END?

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading this story, I have recently updated....and it is cool you are now on deviantart...

Reviewer: Tydomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2012 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 3

Keeping up the suspense!!!  Need more :)  Pretty please.



Author's Response: I know you are busy, but I have updated. Whenever you have a moment to read. My chapter looks like a chapter for once, not a paragraph...over 1200 words.....plus a cool pic at the end...Guess whom?

Reviewer: SMM82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2012 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 3

Well written.
Keep up the good work.
Please update soon.

SM



Author's Response: Thanks very much..have updated since.

Reviewer: Vulcanlady Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2012 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 3

I always liked your poems very much but you are also capable of writing really good prose. I think you capable of picturing the caracters in a very realistic way. I really enjoy this story so far and i'm curious to find out what is going on, although i have some ideas about that. Surprise me! Merci bien de cette histoire fascinante!

Author's Response: Merci beaucoup, pour la suivre, et tres contente pour le compliment.

Reviewer: magpie1600 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2012 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oh I bet he does. Spock had better watch out. I believe Jim and him have bonded.



Author's Response: Thanks so much for following this story.

Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2012 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is really interesting. Looking fwd to more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. It inspires me to continue to write....

Reviewer: Tydomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2012 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oooh... so Kirk's getting the mysterious sickness now, too...  What's happening, I wonder?



Author's Response:

Hello dear friend. It's been so long since I updated this. If ever you have a moment, I updated a new chapter...thanks for reading so far...

Reviewer: Tydomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2012 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ah, I love this story!  You have such an insight into Spock's mind, my friend.  :)



Author's Response: I do try to capture his thoughts. Thanks for letting me know that I have succeeded.

Reviewer: Bastet Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2011 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great start and looking fowards to more.



Author's Response: Thanks Bastet. Not sure if you read the second chapter. It is up if you haven't. Merci mon amie

Reviewer: muggy44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/2011 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

so good . want more. xxoxoxo



Author's Response: Thanks. That is very kind of you. I shall post another chapter soon.

Reviewer: Mairin Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2011 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great start, can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know. I shall do my best.

Reviewer: draq Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2011 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

He is so cute and immature and cute.  I loveyour Spock.  Good job!  He is sweetly immature and almost like a hormonal teen wanting his partner to be attached with him at the hip. XD



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading this story, I have recently updated.

Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2011 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

It's often special going back to one's first stuttering steps in the k/s universe. I enjoy your prose pieces. Am waiting to see what Bones and Jim will find on their return

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to read this story. It means a lot.

Reviewer: magpie1600 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2011 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh my oh my, have they  bonded.



Author's Response: You will have to keep reading. Thanks for liking my work. It is very much appreciated.

Reviewer: Tydomin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2011 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

This looks like a great start!  Your characters are so touching and genuine - I really get a sense of the TOS characters and I can picture them perfectly: the emotions rippling under Spock's stoic facade and Kirk's clueless affection for him are spot on!  I don't think I read this the first time around so I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes.  Keep up the good work!



Author's Response: You are very kind to let me know what you think. I am always grateful to you my friend finding my errors. You only learn if you listen...and apply that knowledge, instead of ignoring it...

Reviewer: Jeanne Marie Sosa Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2011 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

So poignant...you've done a marvelous job of capturing Spock's inner emotions, the turmoil he's experiencing as he comes to realize just how strog his feelings are for the captain, just how powerful the attration is...

I like this story very, very much...it has an almost haunting quaity to it...



Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind review my friend. I am working hard to improve my writing. Even, if that means going back to check a chapter, after I post it. Sometimes, ten times to make sure it's okay. Merci ma chere.

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